Needs to improve writing quality with the progress of the novel. Fanfictions like this are common so he needs to add a unique traits that developed the story in its own unique way. All the best and thanks for the chapters and try to update a bit more frequently.
6 years ago
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kenkaneki123
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6 years ago
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BeastSupremeKing
Good chapter thanks to the Author for his work. . . .
Needs to improve writing quality with the progress of the novel. Fanfictions like this are common so he needs to add a unique traits that developed the story in its own unique way. All the best and thanks for the chapters and try to update a bit more frequently.
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Good chapter thanks to the Author for his work. . . .