Overlord Empress

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This is a work of genius While the character is op the extra background and character development and thoughts are so developed you can just imagine the work that went into I have submitted to and offer congratulations to the author This is above even most real translations that I have read

Because some review about this is a naruto ff, i almost thinks something like that. BUT, it isn't! This story is about a whole new dimensions where MC isn't just live and die in one dimension but life again or transmigrations on to other world/dimensions. Plus, There will not any Anime/Manga based ARC/Volume again 'cause the author want it with his own reasonable reason(and I very much agreed with). This is my fav too cause MC is OP and has her own reasonable justice within her (for me like that). And God, I kinda appreciated Zetsu too with his unwavering faith to unsealed his mother even after thousands or so years, and I like(love) Zetsu bonding time with MC... In the start, this story describes the world backgroungs thoroughly even though there is something that Author Satya2020 might not have told to us. Development of the MC is also good and not too rushed despite some mistakes, everything is in a good limit. Marvellous if you ask my non-irrational mind...

You my friend!! win a MEDAL from me! the strory is great! awesome!! but really you need a better Synopsis, many reader don't know about how awesome this story is! and moar please!!

I love the concept, and this story is probably one of the best in terms of writing quality and development. The female MC is a good change and I am loving it, keep up the good work! P.S: When I read the title I thought it would have a more of a comedic tone. It still is one of the best translated books in a while. XD

I'm sorry to say, but you have failed to deliver your world. The idea is very good and has a lot of potential, but the way it's shaped is simply bad... The first 7 or so chapters were huge info dumps about things that don't impact the story at all. We, as readers, don't need to know the way chakra and body cultivation works in all that many details. You can keep it vague at the start. Start with the early levels. The relevant one. In here, you started talking in detail about the last levels of power and we still have no idea of what in the world is happening. After the info dump chapters, the FanFic part begins, where you should start to expand on the story and it's characters...You don't. You keep detailing the MC's life like an activity log. Granted, some actions can be done like that, but it's very confusing to read things like... "I started training. I am now strong. I'm starting to solve the world's problems..." It's very bland. You should put more emotions into your character. Describe to us her first reaction to being able to see(she was blind for god's sake. She should at least show some reaction to sight...not be like "Oh, I can see. Moving on..."). The surrounding characters should also have emotions. Even the original Itachi has more emotions then your characters... The dialogue is almost Non-Existent. She got monologued by the Overlord for her training then...nothing. I can barely remember when. or if, she spoke. You also adopted the side-character POV style. I personally like this style, but, if you are going to write it as what they are thinking right now, don't explain their whole life... I don't thing anyone thinks of their whole life story every time they form a thought... But, as I said, the story does have potential, It also doesn't have any glaring plot holes witch is good. The grammar is also decent. I have only read 16 chapters and this is my review on those, who knows, maybe after those 16 chapters I read, it gets better, but those chapters made me turn away. To sum it up, it has potential but they way it's written is boring... Sorry for the negative review...

I love that the author is not afraid to change to event of the franchise for creative story telling, also the time skips are just put in the right turning points to process the plot and the MC is female but not the typical everybody loves her at the first look(ok maybe a bit), she's a bit OP though but the author writes well so it is not boring. While the story telling is great and matches the premise ,the action is a bit far in between but I guess that was sacrificed to process the narrative especially with the whole world hopping business, the action scene are not bad though. I also love that the character has a good sense of responsibility and reason since the first chapter, but a part of me wishes that vol1 gave more time for kakashi and obito whole relationship to have more weight but I am still satisfied with the conclusion of vol 1.

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rip dropped but this was actually pretty good! Wish that author kept it up. Even a mediocre end would be nice. Or wait no. Idk. Anyway, would have been nice if the author returned.

It's 1 of the greatest ff I ever read, that's why pls finish this novel and don't stop now. It's been few month now since this novel have any new update , that's why pls continue this novel again.

I just....love it. The world background. Character design. Everything are just perfect! My first impression of this novel was “...ohh! Naruto fanfic without those *****y harem!” My second impression was “yah!! MC is a Female(((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))♡. My third impression was “The naruto arc was so good☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆. My fourth impression “ehh....original world back ground. Maybe not good”. *slapped myself* ∑(ﾟДﾟ) fuc* this second also super duper good!!! I love it!!!!!!!! The best fanfic so far about naruto I have ever read. Without those weirdo freak that drooling after P*ss***. Without freak that used their d**k to think than brain. Thank for creating this fanfic, and especially the original second arc!!!!☆〜（ゝ。∂）

This is a well-written book honestly ............................ Bring it back and update please

When are new chapters coming out? It’s been months now. —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————