Loved the story, character of Alif is great, The 2nd chapter gave shape to the story, This reminds me of sacred games... ๐๐๐๐๐, All the best
6 years ago
3
Burhan1o3
As a reader, it is something u should read. Plot is good. Story is fantastic. Background is amazing. Writimg could have been better. But overall it deserves a read. Well done. And thumbsup๐ to the writer. Thankyou.
6 years ago
2
latief55
Waiting for the 7th chapter.... This keeps getting better
6 years ago
2
latief55
The series is great waiting for season 2...โโโโโโ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค.... deservers 5 star rating. Best of luck...๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Read another 3 chapters of the story, Its keeps getting better, 4th chapter is too good, wish the writer all the best๐๐๐๐. It's characters are also too good, waiting for the 5th chapter.
6 years ago
2
pondi
I LIKED THIS SHORT STORY VERY MUCH: PLEASE RELEASE IT'S PART 2... ALL THE BEST TO THE WRITER... IT'S TOTALLY A BOLLYWOOD STYLE STORY.. ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ
6 years ago
2
latief55
I read this...the concept of the story is worth appreciating.....all the best to the writer....๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐.......the second part should come soon....thanku for ALIF๐คฉ๐คฉ
6 years ago
2
Sammi7860
It's R for ROCKING story.....๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
It's R for ROCKING story
๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
Fantastic story ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
6 years ago
1
cerealthriller
didnt like it but the author trys hard
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6 years ago
1
DYNAMOLUCIFER
โinspiring, engaging and very usefulโฆ different and refreshingโฆ excellent and I thoroughly recommend it to anyone. Cocky and quirky in equal measure, it is a must-readโ
Good work bro!!
Appreciable!!!
6 years ago
1
Burhan1o3
Good story. Let's see what happens next. Exicted to read it. Looking forward to next season. Let's see what this tiny writer has got for us. But this was entertainment to read it. Bonjour! ๐๐๐
6 years ago
1
Daoist7oxCBM
very much engaging, best I have ever read. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
3 years ago
0
SLiasison
Hey ! this is liaison, an editor from Stary.ltd. I just read your book .I love it so much If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact liaison-@outlook.com or yxli94@foxmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
4 years ago
0
Sammi7860
It's a good story to read .......I will give 5 stars to this story.๐๐๐๐๐best of luck to Hanan dar
... guess how am I.
Loved the story, character of Alif is great, The 2nd chapter gave shape to the story, This reminds me of sacred games... ๐๐๐๐๐, All the best
As a reader, it is something u should read. Plot is good. Story is fantastic. Background is amazing. Writimg could have been better. But overall it deserves a read. Well done. And thumbsup๐ to the writer. Thankyou.
Waiting for the 7th chapter.... This keeps getting better
The series is great waiting for season 2...โโโโโโ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค.... deservers 5 star rating. Best of luck...๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Loved it๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โโ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ข๐ข๐ข๐ข๐ข๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Read another 3 chapters of the story, Its keeps getting better, 4th chapter is too good, wish the writer all the best๐๐๐๐. It's characters are also too good, waiting for the 5th chapter.
I LIKED THIS SHORT STORY VERY MUCH: PLEASE RELEASE IT'S PART 2... ALL THE BEST TO THE WRITER... IT'S TOTALLY A BOLLYWOOD STYLE STORY.. ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ๐ฏ
I read this...the concept of the story is worth appreciating.....all the best to the writer....๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐.......the second part should come soon....thanku for ALIF๐คฉ๐คฉ
It's R for ROCKING story.....๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค It's R for ROCKING story ๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค Fantastic story ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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โinspiring, engaging and very usefulโฆ different and refreshingโฆ excellent and I thoroughly recommend it to anyone. Cocky and quirky in equal measure, it is a must-readโ Good work bro!! Appreciable!!!
Good story. Let's see what happens next. Exicted to read it. Looking forward to next season. Let's see what this tiny writer has got for us. But this was entertainment to read it. Bonjour! ๐๐๐
very much engaging, best I have ever read. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐ฐ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Hey ! this is liaison, an editor from Stary.ltd. I just read your book .I love it so much If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact liaison-@outlook.com or yxli94@foxmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
It's a good story to read .......I will give 5 stars to this story.๐๐๐๐๐best of luck to Hanan dar ... guess how am I.