Finally! A speedster in marvel!! Thank you the gods have given me a good fanficl!!!!!.....................................................................
6 years ago
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Nexusprime117
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6 years ago
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Bellyking313
The story has a a fresh and unique plot but it's too rushed the main carecter wakes up one day and has a bunch of mamories and bang I want to be a super hero just like that no back story no why and then immediately he wants to make a super costum and knows and it's too rushed author plz calm down and ease your self and reader into the story don't be so rushed to the good scene
6 years ago
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Alexander_thegreat
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5 years ago
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Melshan
The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém? 😍😍
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6 years ago
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Underworld000
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SAD it
3 years ago
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roexikolweni
It's great, but too bad they haven't posted in a while.
4 years ago
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Pedro_Padre
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6 years ago
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COPYCREATIONS
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6 years ago
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Ediimon
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6 years ago
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Galen_C123
The story is great and has a good plot, but the author seems to rush it a bit and skip writing most of the characters emotions which makes them feel kinda robotic especially when transitioning.
6 years ago
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DeadEye12
He is given powers for no reason (not talking about speed)
The author has no sense of time. I can't stress enough about how terrible the time sense is.
He is so fast but he just stops and stares as people die for 8 seconds......
Apparently after a film studio gets permission to make a move, it takes 8 months to be released. 2 months to create a trailer and 6 months after to be released. which means they filmed everything in less than 2 months. I just can't read this anymore
6 years ago
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Pseudos
So goooood :D 💯🔥
Very enjoyable to read. Please more.
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6 years ago
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Sadman979
It is a very good story.But the the reledge chapter are slow.the story is superb.also the progress.it kinda better than original.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@#@#@#@@@@@@#@@@@@@@@@@@
6 years ago
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smith41
I read a lot of novels but this is one of the best...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Finally! A speedster in marvel!! Thank you the gods have given me a good fanficl!!!!!.....................................................................
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The story has a a fresh and unique plot but it's too rushed the main carecter wakes up one day and has a bunch of mamories and bang I want to be a super hero just like that no back story no why and then immediately he wants to make a super costum and knows and it's too rushed author plz calm down and ease your self and reader into the story don't be so rushed to the good scene
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The MC Will have a girlfriend or Harém? 😍😍 .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. 😎😎
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It's great, but too bad they haven't posted in a while.
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The story is great and has a good plot, but the author seems to rush it a bit and skip writing most of the characters emotions which makes them feel kinda robotic especially when transitioning.
He is given powers for no reason (not talking about speed) The author has no sense of time. I can't stress enough about how terrible the time sense is. He is so fast but he just stops and stares as people die for 8 seconds...... Apparently after a film studio gets permission to make a move, it takes 8 months to be released. 2 months to create a trailer and 6 months after to be released. which means they filmed everything in less than 2 months. I just can't read this anymore
So goooood :D 💯🔥 Very enjoyable to read. Please more. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It is a very good story.But the the reledge chapter are slow.the story is superb.also the progress.it kinda better than original.@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@#@#@#@@@@@@#@@@@@@@@@@@
I read a lot of novels but this is one of the best...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................