This is a young man of twenty years who was reincarnated in High School DXD carrying with him a system to ascend beyond its limits.
The first time I make a fan-fic note is that some characters will not be present.
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The High School DXD does not belong to me, nor any character.
English is not my language
Es una historia exelente, y tienes mi apoyo al 100% me encanta, la empeze a leer hoy y voy en el capítulo 29 ... Eh leido comentarios quejándose de algunas faltas gramaticales y me gustaría ofrecerte mi ayuda si aún no tienes alguien que te edite en inglés ya que soy bilingüe, será totalmente gratis, como dije me encanta tu trabajo y espero que no lo dejes, si te interesa por favor contáctame y puedo editar tu trabajo antes que lo postees, claro no es por leerlo antes que nadie claro que no jejeje ares040508@gmail.com este es mi contacto espero que lo consideres como dije no quiero nada a cambio, solo que sigas haciendo un exelente trabajo
At the beginning i didn't know what to think but after reading about 60 chapters i really like it. Please continue it until the end. DO NOT DROP IT!!! As i said,i really like it and i'd prefer to read it until the end. Keep up the good work,author!
I really liked this novel, it is rare to find a novel of dxd that is not the same formula repeated 99% of the time. And luckily the mc is not that kind of character with those totally generic personalities of animes. The story is progressing very well, the updates are at a good pace. The only problem was grammar, but it was only in the older chapters, now everything is fine. I recommend it, it's really a good story to spend time reading.
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A story about what a newly added character can achieve I never liked some anime events and I always had different thoughts than the author ... That's why I decided to make this fan-fic I wanted to express my ideas maybe they are not of their tastes but at least I'm satisfied when I finish it ...
bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic bad writing + weak MC with cheats + nonsensical actions from different characters = template DXD trash-fic
You should put that english is not your first language! Or just find an editor to fix the wrong typings. My head hurts when i read your story because it feels like watching a video that was chopped and then skipped every 5 seconds.
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Weak MC. .. .useless system .. Beta MC. .. .. Spicy Chicken MC. .. .. Naive MC. .. .. Brainless author .. ... .. Fucking shitty trash novel .. .. ..
Cannot read anymore. It's gotten impossible. And the story makes no sense either. he is somehow attracting women who are 4 times his age and it's honestly pissing me off. Some weird pedophile ****. On top of that the grammar is atrocious. So much untranslated and unedited content it's becoming far too hard to read at all. And this is just at 33% through the story at chapter 32. What's next? Full spanish or japanese chapters? No not reading anymore.
Besides few grammatical error, there is no problem in this novel. Original story is quite good. Issei is realistic, MC is badass, and his harem is almost perfect. One of the best thing is that author didn't write many chapters of MC childhood, which I personally hate for wasting time.
The grammar!!!...please fix it!!! I can’t read a good story with bad grammars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 140 words😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
Could be better. The story itself is fine but the grammar hurts. So many mistakes but I can understand that English is not the authors first language but it wouldn’t hurt to use some editor program online to edit the chapters.
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