Good Job ............... I love ur story. The English was pretty good for me, I'm pretty understand for what u want tell. I hope you will write the story become much better. And keep the story up to date though.
6 years ago
1
AgungOnDunked
Pretty good story though, you have an unilque concept, I gave you find star, but of course u have an mistake, just keep it up, and become bette. I hope you always make the story become better. The English pretty good for me.
Just keep it up to date okay.
6 years ago
1
Jenada
Please just keep it up to date. Can u?
Oh should 140 charackter?
Please just keep it up to date. Can u?
Please just keep it up to date. Can u?
Please just keep it up to date. Can u?
Please just keep it up to date. Can u?
6 years ago
0
Malik2567
Pretty good story but I don't know what I should comment, I just pretty like the story, so to comment u need 140 charackter. So ....
Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
Keep it up!
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Good Job ............... I love ur story. The English was pretty good for me, I'm pretty understand for what u want tell. I hope you will write the story become much better. And keep the story up to date though.
Pretty good story though, you have an unilque concept, I gave you find star, but of course u have an mistake, just keep it up, and become bette. I hope you always make the story become better. The English pretty good for me. Just keep it up to date okay.
Please just keep it up to date. Can u? Oh should 140 charackter? Please just keep it up to date. Can u? Please just keep it up to date. Can u? Please just keep it up to date. Can u? Please just keep it up to date. Can u?
Pretty good story but I don't know what I should comment, I just pretty like the story, so to comment u need 140 charackter. So .... Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Keep it up!
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