-Two teens orphaned at the age of three led normal lives (Well normal for orphaned kids). They travel to a school known as
Mid-Horizon, in the Island of Horizon. The Island of Horizon is an island hidden for centuries by magical barriers, but in this island mortals aren't the same, most of them have reached the highest point of strength a mortal could. But above them are the Superhumans...
-Disclaimer: I do NOT own any images I use. And this is not a finished version of the novel I want to write. So some things may change...
-NOTE: THIS NOVEL IS BEING EDITED, THE NOVEL IS PAUSED. -March 23, 2019.
-NOTE: I have unfortunately stopped writing this novel years ago. Although it lives on in my head, always has, a fantasy world.
I doubt I'll spare my time to continue this story, however I plan to create more stories. Perhaps, in the future I'll come back to this, we shall see.
-May 19, 2021.
👌🏾 book. Best book on the platform. Nonartudtbas such a wide range of jokes installed, ranging from inside jokes to inside inside jokes to actually funny jokes. Love the installation of quad-tea. Just for the 140 words: to a different from that the only thing you need a lot of people are going to get it right away from the city center
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I’m doing this to kind of complete a daily reward soooooooooooo yah. I’m still waiting for this to update🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
If you are a **** with an imagination not childish but young enough to understand superheroes, well this book is for you! You bored and need a good stress reliever well read this! Unlike other fantasies, the characters feel like one friend in your friend group perfect for long, binge film reads. 👌🏾
I know that it still too early to review this novel and I also don't give a review often but this is a good story. I have one complain though. The chapter is too short for it to be a fantasy. I don't know if it is only the first chapter that is short but I hope you lengthen the word count so you can express more of the story. Thanks for the novel.
It's a really great book with a good plot but don't change it too much 'OLIVER'... but have more plot twists and betrayls..... but all in all besides the points I mentioned it's all good 👌👍👌👍👌
2nd review and still think this books story development is amazing Keep up the great work Author XD d(・ω・`) Extra words because it needs to be 140 words...
I love myself xD. Does anyone have any suggestions?? -If you do feel free to tell me. ..Now I'm just buying time for one hundred forty words lol.
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This is my second review for this novel. I'm glad that the author decided to increase the word count per chapter since it is now much better to read. I hope for more chapters to come and thank you for the novel.
Pretty damn amazing. Let me start with very small near nonexistent downsides, you should give a physical description for the characters like sometimes saying something like Sami touched the hairs that made up his goatee or something like that. Maybe you could say Oliver leaped but didn’t realize his 5’9 stature was to big to go through the door. Something to give a good description. Also start internal conflicts. Like maybe say that alyss was always scared around people because of such a tragic event. Other wise 👌🏾
Appreciate the long chapters, You worked hard XD But Seriously use grammerly it will help you alot. Btw im still waiting for Adrian to make his entry...
Story development is smooth and you can get a great visual image of the things the author is trying to portray... Great overall! XD just so you know im talking about the author by himself not about his helpers...
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