Infractuous

Abel felt that life had nothing left to offer him after the love of his life died.

He was once a thrill seeking man who traveled the world looking for something to ease his boredom, and he found that something, or someone.

But sadly, all good things must come to an end, and so did this.

Abel now sat at his mansion wishing and praying that he could meet her again, somehow.

"I wish we could be on the same planet again. So we could hug again, So we could laugh again, So we could be together again." Abel sighed in sorrow as he closed his eyes preparing to go to sleep.

|TGS H&$ B3!N G!F^3#|

|Activating The God System|

|Host is being transported to Gaia|

Abel was stunned awake as a white light enveloped him blinding his vision.

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A Remake of The God System, to hopefully make the story flow better, and fix some errors I had previously made.

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Chapters Have roughly 500 words

The God System

Abel had led Mary towards the Adventurer's Guild, and after the whole confrontation they had as the exited Magician's Guild, Mary was even more eager to start adventuring.


As they entered the Adventurer's Guild they immediately noticed the change in atmosphere, as it was very boisterous and loud with chatting and laughing filling the room.


The two walked towards the receptionist, who was a charming young lady, and Abel asked if they could register to be adventurers.


"Sure thing! Just touch this plate here, so we can gauge what rank you should be given!" She cheerfully replied.


Abel touched the black plate first, and a list of words was produced showing his stats.


As Abel looked at it he was confused because what was shown was different than what he knew personally so he asked Genesis.


|Of course, their appraisal abilities wouldn't be able to fully appraise a Demi-God, so it does not show up on the screen, and substitutes the missing data with something else, or gets rid of it completely|


Abel nodded as that made sense, and he hears the receptionist call Mary to go next.


Mary placed her hand against it and her stats popped up as well.


"Well since both of your levels are not the highest, I am sadly only able to offer you F-Rank Adventurer guild cards" The receptionists explained to them after looking at both of their stats.


Abel nodded as he expected this, and was impressed by how professional the woman was, not attempting to put them down at all.


"I must tell you though, you should look for a party to join, as the two of you yourselves don't have much to defend yourselves with, but it is your choice in the end." She said as she handed them each an Adventurers ID with their information imprinted on it.


"The cost for replacing an Adventurer's ID also costs fifty silvers, so do pay attention not to lose it," She said, "And the Quest board over there, Is where you can look for Quests to complete, and if you complete any of them then you will get appropriate monetary compensation".


"That is the gist of it, so come back to me if you have any other questions you need to be answered," She said smiling "I wish you luck!"


Abel thanked her as he and Mary walked over towards the Quest board, to look for a quest they could complete near Delphi village, as they wanted to head back soon.


They weaved their way around the tables of countless adventurers drinking, and laughing jovially until they arrived in front of the Quest board along with some other adventurers as they looked for a suitable quest to take.
