The God System
Abel felt that life had nothing left to offer him after the love of his life died.
He was once a thrill seeking man who traveled the world looking for something to ease his boredom, and he found that something, or someone.
But sadly, all good things must come to an end, and so did this.
Abel now sat at his mansion wishing and praying that he could meet her again, somehow.
"I wish we could be on the same planet again. So we could hug again, So we could laugh again, So we could be together again." Abel sighed in sorrow as he closed his eyes preparing to go to sleep.
|TGS H&$ B3!N G!F^3#|
|Activating The God System|
|Host is being transported to Gaia|
Abel was stunned awake as a white light enveloped him blinding his vision.
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A Remake of The God System, to hopefully make the story flow better, and fix some errors I had previously made.
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Chapters Have roughly 500 words
I am the author of The God System, and I am rewriting this because I feel like I had messed up my previous work. That was the first real book I had ever attempted making, and as a newbie author, of course, mistakes would be made, so I am now attempting to give it a second go. I hope I have as good of a fanbase as I did previously, so strap yourselves in because we are going to go on an amazing ride!
Here we go this one review is for bonus chapters that you promised. Now for the story I really love the chapter and hope this will be better than the previous one by leaps and bounds. Thanks keep writing.
I love this book so much that when I found put that the old version was being dropped I got extremely sad but now that there is a newer and better version I am extremely happy and I hope that the author will continue to write
I read the old version and if this revamp is better then what we have is a gem waiting to be discovered. The old version had dynamic characters, a unique world setting, and a more realistic feel to its kingdom building aspects compared to the other **** that is on this cite. Expect great things.
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Really good. I liked the old version, buy this one seems to be more developed and better. And now I'm just going to write the characters. Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah
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i read the previous one it was ok and hmm this will be ok 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Nice novel, you have a good level system better than the old one , and upload 2 chaps a day that would be wonderful or make a storry a bit longer 1200 words or more
Great book, haven't started reading yet, but if the past correlated to the future, and this book will be better than the last, then I already know it will be great!
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I love this story but I think I love the old one more because the new one is more rushed it is not self-explanatory and it isn't it just as if you are telling yourself the story like if you read the old one it is more self-explanatory like you this every thing is they also said it's more described but the new one it is not it's just telling a story like tell me your service thank you should understand what I mean but like I said before I love the old one more than the new one.