Second Awakening?
A System?
Having lost the battle of the Dark Catastrophe to the demons—spawns of the Dark Gods— humanity is given a chance at making things right once again.
Born as a twin into a family of high ranking talent awakeners, Damien Terrace is met with trouble when it is his turn to perform the ritual. After awakening the E-Rank Summoner talent, Damien loses everything to his twin.
Exiled by his father to perish away from them, Damien goes through a second awakening that changes the play field for him.
Ding!
[The God of Summons is furious and has blessed you with a system!]
[You have fused with the Mythics Summoning System—A system that only allows you to summon mythical beasts!]
[Obtain nineteen Magic Essence Cores to boost your core to the next level!]
[Slay 200 more demons to unlock another summon!]
Damien's only option is to evolve!
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A/N: I'd be happy to get feedback as this is my first book. This will show that I actually have readers. Thanks.
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Pretty good I like supporting new writings and this one has a lot of potential.
Hello dear readers, it is I, the author. After having written so far, I feel llike I can finally leave a review(shamelessly hehehe...) I just want to say the book's world background, character design, story develop, and writing quality are all great, although this is my first webnovel, I really writing it just as much as you enjoy reading it. I'm going to write more and y'all are going to be reading more. I'm working on improving certain aspects like writing quality and update stability. Regardless, it's a great read so please, TRY IT OUT!!
The story is good, it starts off a bit slow but around chapter 10 it starts to kick it up. The reason I say writing is low, is the author needs to use spell check or proof read the work. I’m 48 chapters in and there is so many spelling/grammar issues that takes me a second to decipher their intentions. They also have several areas where they forget what was mention in last chapter or even at beginning of current chapter making contradictory statements, for example they mention the MC was unconscious for nearly 24 hours and half a chapter later that 24 hours has been changed to an hour. All in all it’s a good read, just need to take some time and decipher the author’s intentions for the story. Hopefully this will be seen by author and they can adjust some in the future as it is a great story so far and I want to see it improve and continue.
So far I think this story has amazing potential keep up the great work author
first off according to author this world has a war every 20 years after 3 years of red skies for at least 3 generations. yet they act like this has never happened before in their preparing even with the speeding up. why wouldnt ur soldiers already have special training? why wait until last minute. next the family thing. so he gets killed off by his fathers decree for his brothers crime. thats what happened. yet the mother is still kissing this dude? without any comment either by author to explain the reasoning. she went from trying to fight him to lets have an anniversary party a few months after u killed our son. this could be a good book but also the forest arc and him staying out there without trying to get out is crazy especially when he could leave continent
I do not care for Damon or ashbourne, so why do they have more chapters than our MC?? The author dug himself a hole by putting the MC alone in the woods, so he has no one to talk to. This means you will need to skip atleast 30 chapters to get back to the MC. Do not read this story and if you do, wait until plenty has been released because this is the ultimate slow burn.
The MC might aswell not be the MC all he does is stay in the forrest and everyone else is the getting the MC treatment he's is the support character at this point this is a waste of potential
Like the idea of the story but the shit writing skills makes it unbearable to read as im spending more time processing what ur tryna say hope u can fix up the gramma as rn its unbearable
The story is good, the plot is good, the world development is also good...... but may I know who the actual mc is? It feels like the novel's own mc is shadowed by the side characters, to the point it frustrates me. I totally liked the story but because of this single thing, this novel ain't cup of my tea...
I hope that it's not those conquering, and too much overpowered mc from the start of the story, because those things are getting boring. but either way, i like this one
i like the power system i like the main character and his powers. the novel is quite good besides the interactions in the Terrace family and the reason the head send the mc to his death, it's abysmally bad like come on the head of the family sent the mc to his death because he felt threatened by him by the way his talent is the lowest it can be E-rank, and supposedly the mc's mother and uncle love him a lot, but i don't see it, the mother she is she doesn't go to save him despite being really strong sometimes she hates the mc's father because he sent him to his death and most of the time she doesn't care about it. i don't know what to say anymore, i tried to read it i really did but every time the interactions happen I'm turned off like it's so inconsistent like how could you claim to love your son/nephew and do shit about him. bye
Alright. Before I get into the review, I want to speak on how long I subtly and directly put off reading this novel because of the other reviews. About 3 weeks ago I believe is when I first added this to my library, but the reviews put me off. During this time, naturally I read many other novels, and reviewed even more. Today I decided that I would give this novel a chance, and what do you know? The negative reviews have to be created by people with a waterlogged brain. ColumbusOhio raises complaints about the lack of special training of units despite knowing the war is coming and the treatment of the MC’s mother toward his father despite what happened (will try not to spoil). The first part is simply answered with: Resources. They don’t have an infinite holy grail to raise people. The next is simply human greed. Humans are always shitty, you can count on that, even during times of near-war. As for his mother; this is just….men who have power tend to always treat women poorly. Even in our world this is true throughout history. It’s expected that a woman still performs her “duty” even if the father cuts down his son and eats his heart. Although the father is not to that point, that’s just the expectations of women. Learn and be better idk. Sea_detective_85 and DJ_Titus have nearly identical complaints and they are the primary reason I put off reading this novel for so long, and they, in my opinion, severely undermine and give awful reviews. Yes, the MC is in a forest for a long time. No, he can’t “just leave the continent” you seem to have not paid attention or underestimate the problem of leaving the forest. No the brother is not “basically the MC”. I’ve read past when he gets out of the forest, and we saw plenty of Damien, Damon, and overarching events. I usually also dislike time spent away from the MC, but I found it was done pretty well here. It’s incredibly common for MCs to go on training arcs where they have no one to talk to, yet it’s suddenly a problem here? Also, everyone else is getting the MC treatment? Genuinely I’d like to say some very unkind words towards this person’s intelligence. The MC in the current chapter of where I am has dwarfed his younger brother and everyone I have met, except for the obvious older generation. Slight spoiler; Damon has slayed 50ish monsters, with the majority being mana beasts and demons accounting for 12 I think. Damien has killed well over a thousand of both at this point. Academies are good and all, but flowers grown in greenhouses don’t always last in the wild. My only real complaint is that there are some spelling typos within the novel which I can easily read past, and that i’m running out of chapters :(
this story focuses on way to many people. you start getting into one part then author leaves the person to focus on someone else. mc does not have any intelligence, the system is useless, mc father is a piece of trash, but everyone respects him and treats him the same. the author wants to tell 12 stories at the same time and it ruins the story. after chapter 67 the story doesnt focus on mc for 33 chapters then still jumps around. i tried only reading the chapters where i saw mc name at in the first couple paragraphs and it is mostly him getting beat up and slime coming to the rescue. my biggest issue is that the father gets too many chapters focusing on him. the shitty father gets more chapters than mc.
The story got better. Of the complaints, the chapters are short. From wishes, I would like the story to focus more on the main character. Sometimes there are chapters with a plot that don't affect the main plot at all.
Author nice story keep going awesome world building side charcter etc. 😘