H/M (Re-edited)

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Author: SaberTrueno86
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A man is haunted by beasts he thinks are werewolves, but if they killed his parents, why does one keep saving him from the rest?



Follow his journey as he gets drawn deeper into the world of werewolves, and even falls in love with one.

Agreeing to aid them, he was told he'd be doing the world a favour, and will keep many innocent human beings safe, by becoming a monster himself.



Then the lies and betrayal, Quintin will learn that there are more going on in the world that only a few people know of, war? end of peace? all sort of things your average person will never have known, and on top of that, he learned that the most frightening monsters on earth, arent necessarily werewolves.

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NeftaroWruter
NeftaroWruter

I read this and it seems to be pretty decent.You got the characters grow(Mostly the protagonist Quintin) and interact to their nature and desires, sense the dialogue for the most part felt natural though simple. Though i do have my gripes like the info dumps in certain parts, but those are scattered so at least they arent overwhelming. There is also the grammar and puncation errors but doesnt distract from the story. The worldbuiling is also nice yet feels incomplete, but theb again this is the first volume so ill likely see more in the seconf volume. Also like the concepts of the races of were, their types and history, cuz i was here expecting some simple werewolves adventire type of story, though i got that, the journey was different from I expected. Fascinated how you came up with this. Overall pretty good, needs improvement of course, but its decently writen and constructed. Wish you a good day writer~!!

4 years ago
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KoKKerot
KoKKerot

I find the characters are well introduced, one can picture them as you read and you can feel the emotional response from each of them and it build the right suspense at the right times. The location settings can be deacribed a bit more though, i fewl you not only need to see the characters but also where the story plays off. The storyline is very interesting. It is a twist tp a story so often told and you don't know what to expect next. I can see the writers personality in the way he writes and that is a good thing, I think the writer is putting down how he feels and what he believes could really happen. There are a few grammar and spelling mistakes but this just shows how good this "******* writer" is by putting together such an interesting story. I suspect that we havent even begun to see the story unfold and i cannot wait to see what is happening next! I subscribed to this book and will follow it chapter by chapter! Good work so far!

5 years ago
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