"I remember it clearly. These giant crystal structures - monoliths - descended from the sky at night. Everyone was left in awe and wonder. It was a beautiful sight as the moonlight reflected fractals of a myriad colours off of them. However, once they stopped descended, the world started to fade into mist, us too. After what seemed like forever, we awoke in a different world: here."
Excellent story so far. Love it. Good work author can't wait to see what this develops into. Will be along for the ride. So far, not much character, world or story development so they're rated low. Once I get more chapters I'll change it. MOAR!!!
I love how the story starts out. The thought of going into so much detail with the heartbeat is something that I haven't READ before (not saying it hasn't been used before) I put story development low because there's not much at the moment same with character development and world background.
Just started reading this, but I'm already hooked. I like how the author goes into detail of what's happening I.e. the characters thoughts and feeling