Damien never asked for this life.
Confined to a hospital bed, chained by a body that betrayed him, he spent his days battling the cruel joke that was fate. But when a single video game shattered his last shred of patience, he found himself facing something even worse—his own reflection, cast into a story that should have never been his.
"Fucking NTR game!" He said as he threw the console.
In the game, the player was nothing but a tragic figure. A weak, spineless fool, doomed to be discarded. A character whose sole purpose was to be broken.
But was that really all he was?
Thrown into a world that scorned him, Damien refuses to play by the script. If fate had already written his downfall, then he would carve his own path—one of defiance, of rage, of survival.
Watch as Damien, a man who once had nothing left to lose, fights to take control of a story that was never meant to be his.
Because in a world that demands he stay weak—he will either shatter expectations… or burn everything down with him.
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The main character, Damien, is heavily inspired by Johnny Silverhand from Cyberpunk 2077. Therefore, the main character's thought processes and his way of speaking may not be for everyone.
But those who can stomach it.
You will be rewarded.
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One or two chapters daily.
Chapter Length 1500-2000
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I wonder if this is also extremely slow paced like your last 2 books or its okay like your first
Mixed feelings on this one. The premise is nothing new but it’s good enough to just read for fun and it’s entertaining but out of the 100+ chapters that I’ve read, nothing has really happened. The pacing is WAY too slow. Novels with slow pacing usually make up for it in writing quality and build up but this novel doesn’t have that. The progression of it feels forced and unnatural and it seems that the author doesn’t really know what they want to do with the series. The main character is the worst offender of this. He’s just awfully written and the writer is so biased towards him its insane. He isn’t naturally written at all and is very clearly just a character, I cannot visualize him as a living person that talks with people or has human interactions. He wins arguements that he very well shouldn’t have, he always gets the last word, we are told he is smart but nothing has been shown to prove that he actually is nothing (noteworthy anyway), people laugh if he says anything even when its clearly not funny or impressive. Everyone around him is either a major dickrider or a hater. He’s both barely progressed in the story (he’s still not even awoken his mana after 100+ chapters and he’s still not done with his body transformation) and changed completely at the same time. The side characters are boring and I can’t even remember a single one of their names even though I was just reading like 10 minutes ago. He isn’t in any relationships yet after 100+ chapters and theres been near to no actual progression in that department that isn’t forced. I fear the side characters are going to only get more boring when he does make the main character have a relationship The story is bland and clearly not planned out but I’ll continue reading for a while regardless. Overall if you want something to blow you away don’t read this but if you just want something to help pass the time then sure, read it.
This shit has to be ai, three different novels with 10 plus chapters per week, impossible, ai allegations in shattered innocence reviews too.
A completely biased 5-star review because I loved the author's last two works! I'll edit this review after reaching 100 chapters
--- In the beginning, I used to like the MC, but time and time again he started acting like a child trying to attract attention as much as possible. Pointless, stupid decisions like a child’s, like someone trying to spend their whole life changing their body, and when they finally do and don’t see surprised expressions from people, they try to commit suicide. It became similar to Chinese novels. The MC is not mature at all. The story makes me imagine the author exactly like that simp god—like someone trying to imagine his life in a “what if” scenario. Well, it’s okay if he imagines that—we all do—but your imagination is like that of a simp who’s been humiliated over and over. Honestly, I hate every character in this entire novel, especially the MC—except his father and mother. Don’t get me wrong—I don’t hate the MC because of how evil he is. On the contrary, I hate how innocent, stupid, and attention-seeking he is instead of being cold. If it were me, I would’ve become worse than him in terms of evil—but not that kind of evil where even cartoon villains for kids are better than him. Even his behavior doesn’t resemble an antihero, more like a side character. And what?? He could’ve used his family to destroy anything in his path—like those ants like Celia, Maureen, Leon, and all of them—but what??!!!!! “I have to prove to them that I’ve changed!!” This idiot is going to waste his whole life trying to change their opinion of him. It’s fine if that was a side goal that gets achieved indirectly—not spending more than 100 chapters or the whole story on it. And also, it doesn’t make sense that random mobs can talk to the MC like that. How dare they and how does he even allow it?? Especially Maureen—he should’ve destroyed that idiot’s family and ended this dumb arc. -
This story has a lot of potential. Hope mc pursues power and eternal life
Well, Darkness Enjoyer. He has great potential as a writer, but he hasn't gotten over his nervous phase yet, the whole plot is based on "slaps in the face". The first 20 chapters are completely skippable and of course the protagonist is defined as a "sociopath", but not a real sociopath, but the retarded version that believes that this is being very cool, ruthless and invincible. Darkness, grow up!
I'll be real, I love this dudes works but damn man the pacing is slow as hell. I mean 163 chapters and it's barely 3 weeks deep. Add on to that the absolutely ridiculous pricing of fast past chapters, I mean come on man 3000 coins for 50 chaps is beyond nuts, especially when it drags so much you could be gambling 75 bucks to maybe get one or two days in world
The writing quality is good and the author has some good past works so I'm sure this will be good
Looking forward to the new book. Will keep updating the review after each 50 chaps.
ai slop. id would be ok with that but each sentence is filled to the limit with unnecessary words its tedious to read. do us a favor and change the author to chatgpt and stop pretending you can write
this definitely has to be ai. the writing just feels weird.
This story has the most insufferable protagonist I've ever had the misfortune of reading about. On a scale of one through ten, the main character would get a negative fifty from me.
I spent 8.3k points on Victoria. wtf have I done
Writing this after reading 92 chapters. The first thing I want to address is that you should not be influenced by the many 1-star reviews; they have read 3-5 chapters max and did not like the way the main character acted in those beginning chapters. Lets start with the Bad things about this novel (very few): 1. The personality of MC might not be for everyone (if you have a snowflake personality, don't read it) 2. I counted 2 chapters in total that had me cringe at some point. THE GOOD THINGS: 1. It only had 2 chapters that made me cringe at some point (very good for academy novels). 2. I think MC has a dope personality, making him more human than most novel protagonists you would typically find in such novels (Bro is HIM) 3. All the side characters have depth in them (I like them all, even the bad ones). 4. Good plot progression (doesn't feel dragged out and flows naturally) I know those might be empty words, but pls just read the first 10 chapters, and if u only somewhat like the protagonist, pls stick around. It gets soooo much better and turns into peak fiction by chapter 40. And Author, pls don't drop this and Don't listen to the haters <3