One gull finds himself at the center of a great struggle for control of the Greater Universe.
Verbose synopsis:
Roughly 3 million years B.M. (Before Mangull), the Greater Universe consisted of the nothing except four 'pools' of mana existing within what is known as the Null Realm.
Over time, and for reasons not quite understood by modern sages, these pools began to spew their mana outward into this realm, creating long and branching channels of the four mana types: fire, water, air, and earth.
The leading theory by most modern sages is that these channels then began to intermingle, creating complex natural systems and compounds. It is also theorized that at about 2 million B.M. the first sentient being arose from this primordial soup of mana, and that being aided in the creation of the other realms within the Null Realm. Those realms were then populated by gods, who, in turn, populated the realms with lower beings (mortals and 'demi-gods').
During the time of Mangull the Mangler, the power balance of the beings populating the Greater Universe is going through a major shift. Over the eons the various mana pools have waned in power, with some pools nearing their depletion. Still, other pools run strong, and various groups of beings have been vying for control of realms.
Enter one simple gull, who, through the interaction of those around him, just may be the variable needed to tip the scales (but in what direction?).
#1 I would remove the scene thing st the begining of each chapter, as a third-party it interupts the flow and also we can inference scene changes. It is also not a good idea to make your first paragraph like a movie script while rest of chapter is not. You should replace this with descriptions and actions to get thst effect you desire from the script paragraph you keep using at he start. I would also try to add a little bit on the world info as it is very confusing to read, at first it was ok since I was inferencing which is good since its not direct but with all the scene changes this makes a bad as the world is confusing as a reader. Your writing quality although not the best was pretty good. All the scene chsnges though made it super wierd to read though. I think you should a chapter 0 with some info on the world (or some extra scenes with some info doesnt need to be everything but so we can understand the world before u transition everywhere like god, if u do this would do it after C2), or try to explain what you see / think in your head in your chapters, make sure not to info dump though as that will ruin everything and make readers potentislly skim or leave. I would try to make your scene transitions more fluid as it will be more interesting to resdad doesnt disrupt flow you built. Try to add a little more descreptions on your characters too, like (guessing goddess was person at the start) in c3 or c4 the water goddess randomly appeared and pitied the seagull? Im confused though ik thats the MC. Also for your synoposis I wouldnt put one gull as that sounds like a name and a really bad one at that.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!