Gourmet_DAO

The second version. 

Agriculture is a very interesting activity. Like the sale of products. Not to mention the cooking, healing cooking. The development of tourism. 


All this will be in this novel. Perhaps the continuation of the first novel, but not a fact.

What is the story about? The story of a graduate student who decided to become a farmer. He sold his apartment and started to run his business with the money he received. Farm, online shop, farm shop. Decided to sell organic food.

Who is this guy? Former student of the Faculty of History. His relatives are historians and artisans, scientists. Great-grandfather Farmer. Grandfather - oriental sweets manufacturer. His ancestor ... Dara is the hero of another novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin" ...

What happens to him? He finds magic coins that have already become a magic entity, he has an all-powerful system. The main character does not immediately use it ...

Why should I care? It is interesting. But not at once. Not from the first pages, there is interesting historical information, there is an understanding of everyday life, traditions, oriental subtleties of doing business.

Almost reality but in a fantastic wrapper.

Pros - good content, many different historical facts about the Silk Road, Eastern Trade, Household reflections on politics and economics, there are interesting ideas for organizing your own business in tourism and farming.

Cons - bad form, that is, the text of the novel is rough, grammar and syntax is lame. There are mistakes.

Overall assessment of the story if to be objective:

Writing Quality - 2 stars
Stability of Updates - 4 stars (3-4 times per week from 500 to 3000 words for one chapter)

Story Development - 4 stars
Character Design - 3 stars
World Background - 3 stars

Overall result: Who wants to learn new things about farming and about the world after the Cold War, who is interested in the first place content, can be sure that he/she will not waste his/her time in vain.

Whoever likes the good form of the syllable, he/she can immediately leave, having pulled his hat, striking his/her horse sideways with spurs, plunge into the depths of the prairie.


Tags - Farming, Cooking, Health, Folk Medicine, Magic, History


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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

Dara, sometimes he was carried away .... it happened this time too. Day changed to night, night to morning and then day, again night and morning. 


Before Dara were the ranks of the miraculous warriors. There was a frame of black bones, exa skeletons, a helmet on her head, eyes made of white crystals under it. On the shoulders there are two gatling guns, one in the center. 


Heavy machine guns on four sides. The exoskeleton was clad in armor of melted black and gray bones. A small box with shells was attached to the cannon. It was a box with space magic, with a large number of projectiles created and a cartridge made of different colored bones. 


And also semi-eternally from crystals charges for energy devices in a rapid-fire cannon. The ranks of the new colonizers of the lands, they turned out not 30 but 309! Dara, began to think about the need to prepare for them and jetpacks, so that they could move through the air. But this is a magical world, so he put a teleport drawing on his armor. 


Now, thanks to this, his warriors could move to any place. Walk on water, be in the air, or travel across continents at once. Unless, of course, they were on this planet or the new world. Who knows? "Why not make a mobile bunker as well? Like a tent, only functional. A portable, fortified point"? 


"The frame is light and strong bones, from bones to smelt sheets such as our Kevlar coating or composite materials." 


"Crystals for creating a protective barrier, as well as cooking food, receiving light, water, fire, a source of energy to power protection devices"? 


"I can have my house in the house"! "Find more crystals to ensure food, water is." 


"Now I have two plans for life in this world, a peaceful and modest and the second one is impudent and aggressive"! 


"The first to create, but I essentially don't need money, I already have everything, a super rich man"! 


"The second way is to take everything you need, without wasting time on negotiations and trade." But Dara remembered that his Grandfather often spoke of "Reasonable Sufficiency."


 So, probably what the answer is, so will be hello. If they approach him with an outstretched cake and water, he will trade. 


If they go with a shout and a sword, their heads will hang on a spear in front of the entrance to his mobile bunker. " 


"Of course, conditional, just the enemy will be confused. Good must be with fists, a very wise Chinese proverb!"


Reflections on choosing a path in a new world