Gourmet_DAO

The second version. 

Agriculture is a very interesting activity. Like the sale of products. Not to mention the cooking, healing cooking. The development of tourism. 


All this will be in this novel. Perhaps the continuation of the first novel, but not a fact.

What is the story about? The story of a graduate student who decided to become a farmer. He sold his apartment and started to run his business with the money he received. Farm, online shop, farm shop. Decided to sell organic food.

Who is this guy? Former student of the Faculty of History. His relatives are historians and artisans, scientists. Great-grandfather Farmer. Grandfather - oriental sweets manufacturer. His ancestor ... Dara is the hero of another novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin" ...

What happens to him? He finds magic coins that have already become a magic entity, he has an all-powerful system. The main character does not immediately use it ...

Why should I care? It is interesting. But not at once. Not from the first pages, there is interesting historical information, there is an understanding of everyday life, traditions, oriental subtleties of doing business.

Almost reality but in a fantastic wrapper.

Pros - good content, many different historical facts about the Silk Road, Eastern Trade, Household reflections on politics and economics, there are interesting ideas for organizing your own business in tourism and farming.

Cons - bad form, that is, the text of the novel is rough, grammar and syntax is lame. There are mistakes.

Overall assessment of the story if to be objective:

Writing Quality - 2 stars
Stability of Updates - 4 stars (3-4 times per week from 500 to 3000 words for one chapter)

Story Development - 4 stars
Character Design - 3 stars
World Background - 3 stars

Overall result: Who wants to learn new things about farming and about the world after the Cold War, who is interested in the first place content, can be sure that he/she will not waste his/her time in vain.

Whoever likes the good form of the syllable, he/she can immediately leave, having pulled his hat, striking his/her horse sideways with spurs, plunge into the depths of the prairie.


Tags - Farming, Cooking, Health, Folk Medicine, Magic, History


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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

Dara, began to tinker with bones and crystals, a mobile, portable bunker. "Can I make a tent with an armor covering? Or maybe go ahead and make something like a house that you can carry in a magic bag. 


Plus it would also fly, move in space and time. yourself with common sense and logic. " Bones, crystals, turned into a monstrous apparat, a super sonic comic ship of the destroyer class. With installed rapid-fire gatlink cannons, ground-to-air and ground-to-ground missiles. And from the earlier found dozens of huge nuclei of dragons and hippos, missiles were created like tactical nuclear weapons. 


- Yes bro! Your imagination knows no bounds, you have absolutely no lack of common sense! Suddenly, a system got stuck in the crafting process. 


- They live here in the Middle Ages, well, there is some magic, energy, levels of improvement, martial arts ... 


- For centuries, for millennia, people have been training their mind, soul, body to become the strongest. 


- Suddenly, some foreigner comes and with one wave of his hand destroys civilization ?! Is it fair? 


"Shut your mouth! And honestly, a simple lazy person, oh I made a reservation, to transfer a farmer from his world, no one knows where"? 


"We do not speak about honesty or not honesty, we live by the fact, there is an opportunity to become stronger, we become"! 


- But the purpose of your stay here, your growth, so that you try, learn new things, reach the key and open a new level of mastery in the labyrinth called wisdom! 


"If you have the tools, you can break through the walls and reach the key. Do not follow the imposed rules of another world, or you will lose. This is the Chinese wisdom." 


- You are rewriting a saying, you dumbass! 


"Whoever has the opportunity can change the rules of the game, the goal is set, I will go to it!" "


Whoever is kind and polite will get a piece of candy, whoever is rude and malicious ... his head will adorn a pike near my bet!" 


"As we said in the Emirate of the Great Central Asian Plains in the 4th century AD!"


 - You are a barbarian !!! How can you be so wild living in the 21st century! 


"If you are good, you have jade, but you are weak, you will be to blame for everything!" 


"If you have already come to a strange world, then either you need to follow its rules and be a loser and deceived, or put yourself, show that the dog not only barks but also bites painfully"! 


The spaceship turned out to be different from what Dara imagined it in consciousness. It was more of a space boat, the Destruction of the World class. Not three kilometers, but only 100 meters long, 10 wide, had a dozen engines, weapons - missiles for air, ground, underwater, surface targets in unlimited quantities. Rapid-fire cannons and 7 rockets allow you to destroy area objects of a large empire. 


The boat had research cabins, medical rooms, a kitchen, living quarters and a battle deck. The boat was controlled from the Space Obaki Center, for 1000 white crystals per month. The boat was placed in a clock in the midst of space magic. 


Combining fantasy science and medieval magic. Despite the riot of fantasy, this world had its own limitations that could not be exceeded at this level. But the limitations were only in size. 


Not content. Dara, got carried away with the creation of a new craft, and the Obaki Space Center received 1000 white crystals at its own expense for each unit of craft.


Wrangling