Gourmet_DAO

The second version. 

Agriculture is a very interesting activity. Like the sale of products. Not to mention the cooking, healing cooking. The development of tourism. 


All this will be in this novel. Perhaps the continuation of the first novel, but not a fact.

What is the story about? The story of a graduate student who decided to become a farmer. He sold his apartment and started to run his business with the money he received. Farm, online shop, farm shop. Decided to sell organic food.

Who is this guy? Former student of the Faculty of History. His relatives are historians and artisans, scientists. Great-grandfather Farmer. Grandfather - oriental sweets manufacturer. His ancestor ... Dara is the hero of another novel "'Jiang' Magic Coin" ...

What happens to him? He finds magic coins that have already become a magic entity, he has an all-powerful system. The main character does not immediately use it ...

Why should I care? It is interesting. But not at once. Not from the first pages, there is interesting historical information, there is an understanding of everyday life, traditions, oriental subtleties of doing business.

Almost reality but in a fantastic wrapper.

Pros - good content, many different historical facts about the Silk Road, Eastern Trade, Household reflections on politics and economics, there are interesting ideas for organizing your own business in tourism and farming.

Cons - bad form, that is, the text of the novel is rough, grammar and syntax is lame. There are mistakes.

Overall assessment of the story if to be objective:

Writing Quality - 2 stars
Stability of Updates - 4 stars (3-4 times per week from 500 to 3000 words for one chapter)

Story Development - 4 stars
Character Design - 3 stars
World Background - 3 stars

Overall result: Who wants to learn new things about farming and about the world after the Cold War, who is interested in the first place content, can be sure that he/she will not waste his/her time in vain.

Whoever likes the good form of the syllable, he/she can immediately leave, having pulled his hat, striking his/her horse sideways with spurs, plunge into the depths of the prairie.


Tags - Farming, Cooking, Health, Folk Medicine, Magic, History


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This is a work of art. Any resemblance to real people or real events is purely coincidental.

Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

New continent. Previously, to search for the ruins of the Gift, he used the knowledge of the other world, looked in archives, in libraries, asked scribes, alchemists.


Ancient races, about strange myths and legends. So, bit by bit, he searched for lost knowledge, tested it. I was wrong, sometimes I found other even more ancient ruins.


- These are all some fragments of ancient weapons, some monsters are still alive!


- Destroy or not, let's save, reprogram and take it for ourselves, increasing our combat and fire capabilities!


"Sir, ahem, it seems to me that we have strength through measures, this small other world!"


One of the dwarf captains tried to argue with the fat wizard.


This is a different world, it can hide unknown forms of life!


"But still, now so far no one has met strong enough to resist you!"


- This is now, and then maybe! Better to have a more powerful weapon up your sleeve! We are for world peace! This does not mean that we want to kill everyone! Not!


"This is confirmed by glass plains, disappeared civilizations, empires of people and eaten monsters!"


- What, you say there, so quietly, speak louder!


- Who ate the tails? You? Well, give it ?! 


- But we'll give you something to eat, no problem!


- I love meat, but normal, not strange.


- This is telling me the gnome, who without pity destroyed people in the last battle ?!


- And I showed that you do not need to bully me!


- This is a strange, maybe hostile world to me! Here you immediately need to preempt everyone so that they do not create difficulties!


- I simply did not destroy anyone like that!


"How did you determine that they were bad"?


- I am generally an objective person, but when it comes to my safety, it is never superfluous to be too vigilant!


- Therefore, it will never be superfluous to increase the combat power!


- Whoever had a powerful weapon, only focused on it, lost!


-Then so that they are well-fed, joyful. 


-This economy must be successful. The idea of a society! The rituals and traditions on which the entire state rests. There must be justice. If all elements are powerful and fair, then there will be no problem!


- Good, should be able to protect yourself!
