Reborn as Adam Taurus

I really like how your taking your time and not rushing the story like other people. I hope that you will continue with what you're doing and progressively build up to the canon storyline. Some things I really liked was how the MC is not finding things to make him op like the moment he steps into the world, not making the MC overpowered as hell and not giving him BS abilities that have no reason to be in the story as I find that stupid but its still entertaining so I guess its okay for most people. Some things I don't really like is that MC somehow still has the same Semblance as canon Adam because as far as I know the semblance depends on ones soul and since Adam isn't the same person I believe he shouldn't have canon Adams "Moonslice" but I don't really find it that distracting and can quickly get used to it. I hope this story continues until its done.

I think it will be better for a Single pairing, and with Weiss Schnee if you can. They're quite similar if you think about it. And that pairing could help with the goal that Weiss wanted to do to the SDC company, fixing it's work ethic. And the ensuing drama would be epic too. Why not Blake? Because it's repeatedly stated by Blake in the early Volume that her relationship with Adam is a student and mentor. But somehow that's all is thrown away and Adam is changed from a Terrorist leader that cares about his subordinates, to a pathetic psychotic yandere ex-boyfriend. And no, don't replace Jaune with Adam, that's just lazy writing. Instead what you should do is try to integrate Adam with the main character of RWBY without eclipsing the main character potential to grow as a character. My suggestion is, instead of having Adam joined the Beacon, just keep him in the White Fang. But instead of submitting fully to Cinder, he only joins her for the sake of his subordinates safety, (Just like in the series the first time Cinder meet him) to silently protect the RWBY main character from the cover of White Fang, and to wait patiently to backstab Cinder. (Preferably during the fall of Beacon, so that Pyrha can be saved). But the main character of RWBY including Blake didn't know this at first but will gradually understand Adam. This will make Adam W Taurus into a cool misunderstood anti hero like Itachi Uchiha, with the Intention of saving as many RWBY main character as possible. And I think that is the most suitable route for Adam. He will be the Anti hero to Ruby Heroism.

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Now i will be completely honest with you i suck at giving reviews, but i would like to say i really like this novel its not fast or slow just normal paced and the person development for adam i feel could be more defined but that can be done at a later date, and with my extremely small knowledge of RWBY fanfics i would say this novel is better than most of the novels i find besides two novels that are of such good quality like this one, so thank you for your effort in writing this novel.

This is an excellent fanfic, Adam fighting style and semblance was my favorite in rwby so i like that you took him as your mc and made some change to his character so that he won't be an asshole while keeping his seriousness and goal for equality. The story is very good so far and i like you pairing him with Blake. Thanks for the good fanfic.

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Love this story. Has a lot of potential to be one of the best Adam fics out there. PLEASE update soon. It’s too good of a story to be left unfinished.

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This is a good fanfic it shows a new perspective on how will Adam Taurus could have been if he didn't go bat**** crazy at cannon and git ruined by not revealing much about him

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Please don't drop this it's a very good novel and please update more