HP: god of potions
This is the story of a soul reincarnated into the body of a first-year student attending Hogwarts, without any knowledge of the world(s) he's in. Follow his sleepless journey across the Harry Potter universe, where his single goal is to gather materials and become a god through his potion system. However, this isn't just any ordinary universe—it's an amalgamation of many. Join Gray Knight as he embarks on his quest to create the perfect potion, uncover who disrupted what should have been an easy journey, and evade the hunter chasing him.
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English isn't my first or second language, but I'll try to write something you can read and understand. This story revolves around potion-making and the search for ingredients. As a wise dwarf once said, alchemy is about gathering materials, so there will be monster fights and hunting. In fact, if you have an ingredient Gray needs, you're done for!
As for romance, let me be honest—I don't know the Harry Potter universe very well. I've watched all the movies and am rewatching them while writing this fanfic, but I won't know obscure characters like Tonks. Who the hell is Tonks? I still don’t know! This makes romance tricky, but I'll try to find the most beautiful girl in this or other universes for Gray. Still, Gray’s first love will always be his gold coins. NO HAREM.
So far it has started off great!!! The author didn’t put any unnecessary details that would seem like filler and actually started the story just right. The way it’s played out is perfect and unique. It already stands out from other fanfics in the genre of HP. I can’t wait to see how the story goes especially for how unique this novel is already great.
What can I say - it's unreadable. ........................................................... ...........................................................
short but nice chapters. it started with mostly retelling of year 1 till chapter 5 when mc got into making his own potions. mc potions have 1-5% chance to give perma effects for him to become OP. he made potion which slows aging which became perma. and mc has reached year 2 by chap 20 so story is going quick. give it a try
Would love more chapters really like it Maybe get him famous for a magic buff potions and stuff
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I think the only defect is the structure of the text, in some parts it is very confusing. Otherwise it's very good, the author manages to explore the potential of potions well and has a very good world development, he knew how to fit franchises like Tomb Raider very well
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Got to chapter 14 couldnt stand it anymore. First chapters are all copy paste, then it shifts to self centered writing with the mc skipping pretty much the entire first year interacts with no body. I could go on about multiple flaws but I straight up cannot be arsed. I do not recommend it's boring, bland and at chapter 14 all I know about the mc is that he likes potions zero personality. Author have him interact with the world he is in otherwise what's the point.
Bon début continue comme ça . 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡??¿??!?!?!??!?
unreadable!! can any body tell where can I read it it's have raw
La verdad no se que decir solamente siento que en un punto se desvío de lo que me gustaba y me dejó de interesar. Algo que me hubiera gustado ver es más investigación sobre las pociones, pienso que al comienzo venía por buen camino pero luego solo se nos dice que inventa una poción y resulta ser de utilidad unos capitulos mas adelante. Me hubiera gustado ver más exploración y aventuras más "mundanas" antes de saltar a la trama de RV siento que fue todo muy precipitado.
Sucks suck sucks sucked sucks suck sucks bad
I stared this book today , I was in for a wild ride ,