Begin | Fanny
Come to think of it, MLBB is a universe within ours. All of the heroes in the game are well aware of this fact, but they've grown used to this information.
To be used to a world where you can't get hurt—where you can easily heal these so called "wounds", where nothing is taken seriously for everything is really just a fragment of a game. . What happens when their world of fantasy suddenly separates from us and becomes its own universe—parallel from ours?
"I don't think you belong here, in this world."
The sentence that started it all, the words that caused the sudden shift of their universe.
Gusion doesn't realize this, but the moment he said these words to Fanny was when the chain of misfortune and unexplainable events began occurring. Becoming self-aware in a programmed world was a rule that was broken by the two protagonists.
In this adventure to seek for the truth of their universe, Fanny encounters enemies that were once her allies, and has her past enemies become her close comrades.
Find out more about their journey by reading Begin | Fanny!
Honestly one of the better mlbb stories I've read so far. The way your story is progressing is really intriguing and I'm quite excited to see how it all plays out in the end. Also very surprised by the Fanny x Gusion pairing haha. Your story seems quite rushed though, almost like a touch and go. I'm not sure how to phrase it but the plot... Doesn't go deep enough? Keep it up tho :)
Okay, first of all, this has an interesting start, but as I go through, the execution is a bit common making the story a bit lame (sorry). It so hard to execute a story inside an actual game based plot. I rarely see existing stories or even movies who execute an in game related content. As of now, I only see Wreck-It Ralph animated movie to pass that standard and understandable. I admire the way you put side stories in them while in the battlefield but I don't see a connection why the flow has to end up into 7 chapters long. Hope you make the next chapters more interesting.
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This story have a special role in my library. This is good and I do love how your story cycle flows. Keep up the good work. I will definitely read this even after the contest ends. qwertyyuioppasdfghjklzxcvbnmqequaowpajsnsbsuxoco nsidodoanabsjocpslanabsjcixodnsnshixodk
Writing Quality : 5.0 The grammar is outstanding, I saw no grammatical mistakes at all! The author has great vocabulary for being able to use words when describing feelings of the characters. Stability of Updates : 4.0 NGL, I don't like books that don't update within two days from the previous chapter, but the story itself makes up for it. Story Development : 5.0 The flow of the plot is smooth. Each and every chapter covers up usually only one event, but it's worth reading because of how attached you feel towards the characters. Character Design and World Background : 5.0 & 5.0 Like I said, how the characters from the game are portrayed is great. Their emotions, thoughts, everything about them is clear. So are the places and the world's structure. Everything needed from the official lore is applied, and I like that.
Your stories never fail to impress me, choonlo! I joined webnovel because of the link you posted in tumblr, and trust me, I don't regret anything! What suprised me was the fact that you actually play mlbb, do you mind adding me? Haha. From romance, to action, and drama? Never have you failed to express the emotions and thoughts of the characters in your stories. I'll be supporting you all the way! Keep it up! ☺️😄
Good job men!! This is very good. . Nice to see you doing things. . Padayon sa pag uswag! Go lang ng go! Go lang ng go! Go lang ng go! Go lang ng go!
Go men! Let's do this and top this game!! I know you are one of the best!! so go break a leg and bring home the bacon in every game!Go men! Let's do this and top this game!! I know you are one of the best!! so go break a leg and bring home the bacon in every game!
Go men! Let's do this and top this game!! I know you are one of the best!! so go break a leg and bring home the bacon in every game! Go men! Let's do this and top this game!! I know you are one of the best!! so go break a leg and bring home the bacon in every game!
I'm giving you 5 stars!! This is awesome. . i was not a big fan of MLBB, but through this, i just downloaded the game and started playing. . I'm a bit noob and started at a very low rank, but i'm enjoying it so much!!
Good job men!! This is very good. . Nice to see you doing things. . Good job men!! This is very good. . Nice to see you doing things. . Good job men!! This is very good. . Nice to see you doing things. . Good job men!! This is very good. . Nice to see you doing things. .
Well I give 4 stars for Updates but damn, I really like how this story would go. For the plot, I say, it's intense and made me want to read more but yeah. I'll be sticking in this story and this deserve to be one of the top 3.
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i would've given it 5 stars if it werent for the unstable updates. i saw the date of the last chapter from when it was published and let me say its been a pretty long time lmao. everythings good, grammar, plot, amount of drama, action, and etc. keep it up sis.