Bright Claw: Emergence

Hi! This is actually a good read! Except for minor spelling and grammatical errors that I see which have a lot of room for improvement in the future, the story is interesting and for me that's already a good start. You should add more chapters soon so that we can read more of the plot. Overall, it's great! Keep it up and good luck!

Aww, now I know why you reacted to the action scenes I made. It is because yours also has a lot of action scenes. Chapters 1 and 2 are lacking in detail in terms of elaborating the whole scene glad that it has improved in Chapter 3. While reading, I could actually imagine now each moment without rushing from what will happen next. Keep it up!

Kilala ko tong writer in real life. Napakagaling niya talaga mag sulat, sinusubaybayan ko kanyang mga works since college pa lang... Di ko akalain na sinubukan niya gumawa ng fantasy type, halos romance kadalasan ginagawa niya. Galing mo talaga bro!!

Parang Goblin Slayer!!! Angas, sana makapasok to sa top 10 ito... susubaybayan ko to hanggang magtapos. Deservo magka spot. Yung battle scenes ay nakakahype, damang dama ko yung labanan para bang pinapanuod ko ng live

This is actually good! The story, the characters, overall is pretty good nevermind the mispelling in the story. I hope this could reach to the Top. I wish I can support you but my diamonds was spend in other stories maybe later will do.