Equality. Peace. Freedom. We humans had fought endless battles and wars for these thoughts. Big and small conflicts are fought in order to achieve this ideas! Diffrent factions. diffrent nations. Diffrent colors and groups all war against each other. for fhe sake of these words.. is it really worth fighting for? dying for? bleeding for? Maybe we will find out on our final battle and clash. 

Join Gray as he unlocks the truths and lies and separate the friends from enemies in this epic story that will surely have us wondering which is right and which is wrong..

The Trap Called Equality

You have a plot and direction for your story, author. I salute you for that. You also have a good grasp of how to play with your MC's emotions and ideas. The story is engaging. Your grammar still has room for improvement but you don't have to worry much about it because your sentences flow naturally and it's still easy to follow. 

I think what you should prioritize for now is the stability of updates and more on world background. Also, work on the punctuations and capitalization. Also break down your paragraphs into more paragraphs. I suggest you always leave the quoted conversations as a line/paragraph of itself. 

In other words, work on making your paragraphs easier on the eyes. Honestly, some chapters look more like a wall of text to me. And I hate to say this, but many readers dislike wall of texts. XD

Uhh, no worries. This is all just the technical side. When it comes to content, you're already on the right direction. :-)

I'll give the world background a perfect five. Overall I will say the story has a good plot. The writing style is ok but you have to work with some errors.  I am not good with grammar so I cannot spot them.  But I noticed some errors in capitalization. You willhave to work on that.  That's all! 😊😊😊Hope you will continue writing the story.  

First of all, the title "The Trap Called Equality" really caught my attention. Since there's only a few chapters so far I'm not sure about future stability of updates, but so far its a full five :) The grammar and spelling could be proof-read but overall, it's a pretty nice plot. Good luck and great job!