The Trap Called Equality

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Author: Captain_SoulFox
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Equality. Peace. Freedom. We humans had fought endless battles and wars for these thoughts. Big and small conflicts are fought in order to achieve this ideas! Diffrent factions. diffrent nations. Diffrent colors and groups all war against each other. for fhe sake of these words.. is it really worth fighting for? dying for? bleeding for? Maybe we will find out on our final battle and clash.



Join Gray as he unlocks the truths and lies and separate the friends from enemies in this epic story that will surely have us wondering which is right and which is wrong..

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FallenBlue
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5 years ago
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Allen_Clay012
Allen_Clay012

I'll give the world background a perfect five. Overall I will say the story has a good plot. The writing style is ok but you have to work with some errors. I am not good with grammar so I cannot spot them. But I noticed some errors in capitalization. You willhave to work on that. That's all! 😊😊😊Hope you will continue writing the story.

5 years ago
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Daoist_Food
Daoist_Food

First of all, the title "The Trap Called Equality" really caught my attention. Since there's only a few chapters so far I'm not sure about future stability of updates, but so far its a full five :) The grammar and spelling could be proof-read but overall, it's a pretty nice plot. Good luck and great job!

5 years ago
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