Birth of Monsters
Author: Zane_d_mad
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Albi a life mage done wrong will Seek to avenge himself on the kingdom that has destroyed his home.
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52 chapters and no reviews what's going on? This story is really quite good though there certainly are some things that could be improved your grammar is fine though it could use some work not all parts of the story are completely clear and the tenses that you use can sometimes break the flow of the story though it can easily be fixed it would be a great quality of life improvement for readers. Overall it's a good story the main character is interesting although his personality is a bit generic. The world seems inspired by some other novels but it still feels original I hope you continue writing and enjoy working on it.