Tao Fuyuan, a 25 year old Chinese man, had just graduated from a culinary college when his soul was hurled and tossed about, and eventually ended up in a stranger’s body in a strange world.
This is a review of the first four chapters. The main character transmigrated into a magical cultivation world after having just graduated from culinary school. His new body is a rare top level maga body. How the original soul left the body is unknown. Right now the story is focused on world building and not character or plot development. It feels like the main character is on vacation not unwillingly transfer to a different world. The story needs *******.
The author has a great command of the English language. There are no grammar issues.
This is a review of the first four chapters. The main character transmigrated into a magical cultivation world after having just graduated from culinary school. His new body is a rare top level maga body. How the original soul left the body is unknown. Right now the story is focused on world building and not character or plot development. It feels like the main character is on vacation not unwillingly transfer to a different world. The story needs *******. The author has a great command of the English language. There are no grammar issues.