Tao Fuyuan, a 25 year old Chinese man, had just graduated from a culinary college when his soul was hurled and tossed about, and eventually ended up in a stranger’s body in a strange world.
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anon88
This is a review of the first four chapters. The main character transmigrated into a magical cultivation world after having just graduated from culinary school. His new body is a rare top level maga body. How the original soul left the body is unknown. Right now the story is focused on world building and not character or plot development. It feels like the main character is on vacation not unwillingly transfer to a different world. The story needs *******.
The author has a great command of the English language. There are no grammar issues.
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email bishop_white@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
This is a review of the first four chapters. The main character transmigrated into a magical cultivation world after having just graduated from culinary school. His new body is a rare top level maga body. How the original soul left the body is unknown. Right now the story is focused on world building and not character or plot development. It feels like the main character is on vacation not unwillingly transfer to a different world. The story needs *******. The author has a great command of the English language. There are no grammar issues.