Birthday [Oneshot]

Exceptional Grammar, your way of writing is beautiful by fully immersing yourself in the story, I could say more of the pros & cons, but I'm just lazy. Tip- Don't use big words when small ones work, like on the word 'detract' when 'distract' works. Rather a short review than my usual. Be optimistic, every Novelist needs it.

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I want to tran this novel to Burmese. Cuz I think that is very good. The writing is soft and gentle.Please give me permission😗❤️[img=recommend]

The story was beautifully written and the emotions were well placed . I liked the ending , there is such a scarcity of true love , I really liked it though it was a tragedy , it filled my heart ,thank you author for giving this gem[img=recommend]

As usual..A very good grammar and vocabulary..The revealing is so touchful and sad 😍 ..i really want to say more about this story but i have to leave that for the future readers and let them read this masterpiece😎 Tq for this oneshot !!

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I hope to see more of one shot or a continuation of this. Hehe. Prequel. Sequel. Whatever you call it. I am delighted to read this like some sort of a heroin piercing through my heart.

This was very lovely. I almost cried at the end since the ending was so sweet but also very sad. I hope you keep making more of these. You have a very beautifu way of showing emotion in the stories >_<

Sweet and tragic, really well done too, a very good and memorable oneshot that takes just about 5 minutes to read. ......................................................................

🙌 Good story One chapter, but it’s enough to tell this short story. Good grammar, nice writing. I just stumbled across this. Good read 👍

It was refreshing, I loved it because of it was a story with a different plot, your writing skills are amazing, it was a beautiful story story.

________________________________________________________________ It was good. Loved it.♡♡♡ ________________________________________________________________

at fist I was so sad that he is alone in this world... but they found each other... Short and sweet. I love this one 💗💗🤍🤍🖤💘💘😍😘🥰🥰❤️💝❣️💞🤎💚♥️💙💕💖🥰💕💚💕