Haunted Heritage
Set in the heart of France, Anastasia Le Siene Trèmo inherits her parents art and artifacts museum, built next to the Paris catacombs, after her parents Barbara and Remiere suddenly have to depart for Egypt. They bid her good luck on starting her own path towards the family business as she discoers many secrets within her home and herself. But what her parents didn't tell their child was that she wouldn't be doing this all alone like she thought. Many of Anastasia's art peices and sculptures she brings into the museum start coming to life on their own and become possessed by the spirits living inside them wanting her help in finishing their remaining unfinished business, no matter what the cost of Anastasia's own life may be to get it done.
Murders, thievery, betrayal, and lost dreams were the last things Anastasia needed on her list.
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This is a review of the first two chapters. The heroine of the story is a twenty something female part-time cafe worker who has to suddenly take over her parents’ museum. She is unhappy with her parents for starting a five year trip and only giving her a few hours notice before their departure. During her first day as a curator, a “water” leak at the museum turns out to be caused by a haunted painting. The author spends time to fully describe the setting and side characters. This description doesn’t take away from the pace of the story. There are some grammatical issues. Many sentences turned into run-on sentences. The grammar mistakes are what slow down the story.