One Piece: The Hundred Swords Pirate [Rewrite]
Arima Koujiro, a middle-aged man who worked as a Yakuza was tired of his boring life. Being a Yakuza in modern time was not as exciting as he thinks it was when he read the stories about Yakuza in his childhood.
Expecting life full of action and glorious fights with the rival Yakuza clan when he initially joined Yakuza, instead, he faced with boring ordinary office work with some "business visit" here and there to clients that late to pay their loans.
On the night of his 40th birthday, he partied with a bunch of his colleagues on the penthouse apartment that he earned from his 20 years working as a Yakuza.
Passed out after having too much drink, he woke up in the middle of nowhere instead of his apartment. Before he gets to process what happened and figuring out where he is, a blue hologram screen popped out in front of him with a mail sign in the middle of it.
This is a story of Arima Koujiro fulfilling his dream of exciting and full of actions life that he always wanted.
The cover picture is not mine, all rights belong to the artist if he wants me to take it down, I will.
Disclaimer, One Piece and all characters in it belongs to GOda-sama except my OCs.
I'm just following the tradition of self reviewing author, don't mind me, just passing through. I hope you enjoy my work and stay with me for a long time. ---------------------------------------------
I see that you're trying to write a story of a proper pirate in the One Piece world, interesting idea. Grammar wise it's decent, MC is a has a mind of twelve years old but can be an ***** when it's needed, it's a good One Piece Fanfict, I'm looking forward to what will you do in the future.
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From what I've read until chapter 8, the story is decent, it's doing slowly and not too rushed. Grammar and sentencing are alright I assume the author's native tongue isn't English. Overall it's a Good One Piece Fanfiction.
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I love this it’s an insane fanfic and a cluster-f**k of stuff and it’s just great. Just read it. 14014014014014914014014014014014014014014010401401401401340140
So far its really Decent story... But Let see what u do in future.. ☁☁☁⚡☁☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡☁ ⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡⚡ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁⚡⚡⚡☁☁ ☁☁☁⚡☁☁☁ ☁☁
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No bad review so far... Let's check this out then.... 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊
5 stars for the win ghahahaha. Lets bring the BAD BOYS OUT!! The story is about a Yakuza trying to be a Pirate with a good for nothing god for a stalker hahaha. Just kiddin.
Coo story keep it up ###################################################################################################################
Cool idea, keep it up -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Good story so far and badass MC character, anyway thank you for novel.