THOSE 4 Chat Groups

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Author: Rothfuss
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What is more worse than zero on a marksheet?

A day in which you have to steal money to save your mother. Getting caught red-handed about that and getting added to a mysterious chat group which really loves dark things of the world.

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But actually and REALLY what is the most worst thing?

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Who knows?

Just kidding.

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IT IS ENDING UP IN THAT LAST CHAT GROUP OF THOSE FOUR CHAT GROUPS.

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MyCharacterLeads
MyCharacterLeads

First time reading novel about hacking! This one is intriguing! Writing quality - Quite good. Though I suggest to use proper punctuation mark in dividing sentences like using " and " in conversation. World background - nothing to say for it was in modern world. Character design - Too early to say something about it. But I just feel a little fast pace when he fall in love that easily to Coasma. (Does it really important part? Might be. His friend, the boyfriend of the girl might have a great roles in the future. Hehe just guessing) Update - I suggest to keep up your daily update. It will attract more readers. Hope this help! Keep it up author.. 👍

5 years ago
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Kenlinvert_Z
Kenlinvert_Z

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