(Dropped) A guy finds himself in Harry Potter, but it isn't quite the world he remembers from the books. Girl-who-lived? Living parents? Non-fugly Voldemort? Even with more retries than Bill Murray and Tom Cruise combined, can he figure out the perfect run?
Edit: I intended for this story to be 80% action and 20% comedy. Instead, it's 20% action, 30% angst, 5% comedy and 45% plot holes.
Seems nice Turmoil at the front Wilhelm's forces in the hunt There's a thunder in the east It's an attack of the deceased They've been facing poison gas 7000 charge en masse Turn the tide of the attack And force the enemy to turn back And that's when The dead men Are marching again Osowiec then and again Attack of the dead, hundred men Facing the led once again Hundred men charge again die again Osowiec then and again Attack of the dead, hundred men Facing the led once again Hundred men charge again die again Two combatants spar Hindenburg against the Tsar Move in 12 battalions large Into Russian counter-charge They'll be fighting for their lives As their enemy revives Russian won't surrender, no Striking fear into their foe And that's when The dead men Are marching again Osowiec then and again Attack of the dead, hundred men Facing the led once again Hundred men charge again die again Osowiec then and again Attack of the dead, hundred men Facing the led once again Hundred men charge again die again
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Confession: the 1000+ views this story has was just me reloading over and over again. This story is so sweet...it's like some guy just sat down and wrote it an hour.