Critical World Online

Critical World Online

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Author: Haven_In_The_Dark
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Erin Crest was a poor bastard who had been screwed over many times.



One day, he lost his job and had no way to find any income.



Oddly enough, just as he was pondering on what he should do next, a package was mailed to his door.



In it contained the newly released VR Capsule that allowed someone to connect to the game, Critical World Online!



Erin however, does not want to be like any other player. He wants to become the best.



Thus begins a legend in the making.

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Rainstarlight
Rainstarlight

Read my comment on the first chapter for my thoughts.🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔

6 years ago
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Haven_In_The_Dark
Haven_In_The_Dark

A review form the author, me! Its an absolutely amazing story! Probably. Well, shamelessness aside, you might enjoy it! I have a feeling that this story is going to be high up there in the power rankings.

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