I knew I should not have read this when the
synopsis talks about Op MC not wanting to kill 😑
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5 years ago
9
KoryuHotshot
8 out of 10 chapters is about the the author *****ing around ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
5 years ago
8
GGMissFortune
another hs dxd ****fic where op mc gets chummy with the devil/fallen angel faction/s
another hs dxd ****fic where op mc gets chummy with the devil/fallen angel faction/s
another hs dxd ****fic where op mc gets chummy with the devil/fallen angel faction/s
5 years ago
4
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
The writing quality and formatting and even grammer are alright... Its just that the entire story thus far is kinda... Basically he's been made an omnipotent god. Knows of everything as if he were a reincarnate from our universe whilst he's not and is super naive in an annoying way.
The chapters are short and as such half way through the currently available chapters he's in kuoh and meeting rias...
The whole story simply consists of the bare bones. You understand what's going on but it is difficult to relate to it let alone feel immersed.
I think the best way for the story to improve would be if we saw some form of growth in the character. Instead of a simple 14 years later and a goodbye to people he supposedly knows...
I also think some introspection wouldn't be amis...
5 years ago
3
gargantaaa
TRASH.
5 years ago
2
Kleisz
Reveal Spoiler
4 years ago
1
Avalon_EverDistant
The started out so well but then you just asked people’s opinion of what’s good writing it while think for the writer is good but you need to think for yourself
5 years ago
1
DURJOY_Barua
mc is too confusing and most of the chapters are not story out of 30 chapters only 15 maybe story others are not related to story truly disappointing
2 years ago
0
WorldlyDesires
Refreshing change of pace. Really weird but interesting to see a "innocent" person like this in dxd. Like the way the characters seem nicer if you could call when they interact with the mc.
I knew I should not have read this when the synopsis talks about Op MC not wanting to kill 😑 ————————————————————————————————————————-
8 out of 10 chapters is about the the author *****ing around ...............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
another hs dxd ****fic where op mc gets chummy with the devil/fallen angel faction/s another hs dxd ****fic where op mc gets chummy with the devil/fallen angel faction/s another hs dxd ****fic where op mc gets chummy with the devil/fallen angel faction/s
The writing quality and formatting and even grammer are alright... Its just that the entire story thus far is kinda... Basically he's been made an omnipotent god. Knows of everything as if he were a reincarnate from our universe whilst he's not and is super naive in an annoying way. The chapters are short and as such half way through the currently available chapters he's in kuoh and meeting rias... The whole story simply consists of the bare bones. You understand what's going on but it is difficult to relate to it let alone feel immersed. I think the best way for the story to improve would be if we saw some form of growth in the character. Instead of a simple 14 years later and a goodbye to people he supposedly knows... I also think some introspection wouldn't be amis...
TRASH.
Reveal Spoiler
The started out so well but then you just asked people’s opinion of what’s good writing it while think for the writer is good but you need to think for yourself
mc is too confusing and most of the chapters are not story out of 30 chapters only 15 maybe story others are not related to story truly disappointing
Refreshing change of pace. Really weird but interesting to see a "innocent" person like this in dxd. Like the way the characters seem nicer if you could call when they interact with the mc.