hi i am trying to write this in author's pov
natasha and victor sat outside the room of rachel as they cannot visit rachel as she is in icu.
natasha : victor why would she commit suicide and reach to this condition
victor : mom , may be she is not eating and only drinking . she will be fine and happy. after recovering i will clear everything
natasha : you people used to fight but never like this
victor : mom that is past .
natasha :she is the only thing i have victor
victor : mom, i have been hiding so many things from you.
natasha : tell me , now itself
victor : mom ,first eat something and i will tell you everything
natasha : no victor , i will not
victor :
mom you will be hurt after you know everything
natasha : ok fine tell me
victor : my father and you made us to meet for first time .
4 years back
authors narration :
victor met rachel for a deal because their parents them to start business although rachel want to start a business but victor was not interested as he was a surgeon but victor s father mr. wilson lee back mailed victor for a fair trade of new hospital for running business for 2 years finally victor had to agree .but natasha and wilson planned a small project if they fail there will be no great loss . rachel was angry because she wanted to deal alone .natasha wanted good relation with wilson for sake of the business.
COFFEE SHOP:
first meeting of rachel and victor .victor is waiting for rachel and rachel came very late .
victor : hello, miss Anderson
( rachel furrowed a eyebrow)
rachel: ok , mr .lee my name is rachel .
victor : victor
rachel : this project is very important for me .i wanted to make it better
victor : not for me
( rachel hates lazy people )
rachel: ok , first of all these are files and there is a meeting at 9:30 am sharp
(
WHILE RACHEL IS SPEAKING . SUDDENLY OUTSIDE OF CAFE THERE IS AN ACCIDENT .THEN VICTOR RAN OUTSIDE AND CALLED AMBULANCE AND SAID RACHEL TO GO BUT SHE LOST CONSCIOUS
)
victor : rachel , get up
VICTOR LOOKING TOWARDS HOSPITAL PEOPLE
victor : take her also
(
VICTOR THINKING ABOUT WHAT REALLY HAPPENED TO RACHEL . HOLDING RACHEL IN HIS ARMS .HE GAVE SUGGESTION TO NURSE TO FIRST AID THE PERSON MET WITH ACCIDENT . AFTER GOING TO HOSPITAL RACHEL GAINED CONSCIOUS
)
rachel: victor what happened
victor : are you fine ?
rachel : yes , i am
victor : go home
rachel : but i have no car .
victor : call taxi
rachel : i can't go , please drop me for today
( RACHEL LOOKING LIKE SHE HAS SEEN SOME GHOST )
victor : ok wait , i have to check the person
rachel: thank you
(
VICTOR DROPPED RACHEL HOME BUT HE WAS CONFUSED SOMETHING IS WRONG WITH RACHEL BUT LEFT THAT POINT)
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