It's the turn of the 21st century in a world not unlike our own. 14 year-old Michael wakes up on the first day of high school with a nosebleed, a splitting headache, and the voice of someone claiming to be him from a number of years in the future in his head!
"We could have been, and we need to be, better... so, congratulations, I'm sorry, and good luck!"
Stuck with a somewhat overbearing voice in his head that seems hell-bent on ruining his life, Michael will have to survive such ordeals as... doing well in school, eating right, exercising and... learning demonic contract law? Stay tuned to find out!
So far this series has been amazing, its well thought out, near to none grammatical errors, and fairly realistic. It has a system thats more of a helper than an OP tool. The world building is very well done. The authors doesn't give the entire history of the world in one go, they slowly give small info dumps and hints about the world making you realize this might not be earth and you're left craving more. This series is only about 20ch in when i made this review so take it with grain of salt. But ive been seeing very small hints and foreshadowing that this novel will become a sy-fi action and it is extremely well done because you don't know if its true or not, it makes you think. And when a novel manages to make me go back and read to see if the hints might be real I give an automatic 5stars. Summary/Pro's -well thought out -small but precise info dumps -not OP system/character -overall entertaining -so far amazing worldbuilding Cons- -It's basically a slice of life rn (but that could change in the future) -story pace is kinda slow -stop making me want moar Like I said take it with a grain of salt, the story is only 25ch in, It can easily change.
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This is quickly turning into one of my favorite stories on Webnovel. The MC, Michael is relatable, the System is snarky, and the advances he is making are incremental. He gains increases in stats in .001 increments, so he although he may become OP at some point, it is going to take a while. I like watching the MC work for his rewards.
Quality of writing- Above Average Stability of updates- Stable Story Development- So far, good Charcter Design- Interesting World building- Too soon to comment A novel with an interesting original premise. Has good potential. Would be very pleased if there are more chapters with the same or higher quality of content. Keep up the good work!
I very rarely give 5 star reviews on stories but this one if it claimed to deserve 4 stars no other author would dare say there's was worth 5. I am absolutely smitten by this story and the authors style, it feels like I'm reading something I've lost long ago, but what is it that I've lost? Joy. I havent gotten joy from reading in a long time, but this one, it makes me happy in an Indescribable way, I feel like I'm on a high while reading this, i love it.
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Story is well writen, realistic and enjoyable so far! I love the way how Ml and system talk with each other.................................
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Although I didn't read too far (before getting a little bored), I'd say this story is really great! It kept me focused on the story for about 45 chapters, until I just got a little bored.
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