Interesting, Good, and Captivating.
Yes, those are the right words to use. Keep it up author.
On that note, if you're a lover of an interesting, succubus themed erotic story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely the story for you.
Go ahead and give it a try, you'll not be disappointed.
6 months ago
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Raj_K_Jain
At certain places it creates confusion in the use of the names of the characters. some times first name is used and at other times surname is used. At times gender usage of he for she etc. makes it a little difficult to immediately connect to the said character.
it's very captivating and interesting tbh
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Interesting, Good, and Captivating. Yes, those are the right words to use. Keep it up author. On that note, if you're a lover of an interesting, succubus themed erotic story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely the story for you. Go ahead and give it a try, you'll not be disappointed.
At certain places it creates confusion in the use of the names of the characters. some times first name is used and at other times surname is used. At times gender usage of he for she etc. makes it a little difficult to immediately connect to the said character.
raww..........??????????????or mtl???????