Protagonist is great, updates are amazing (3 chapters per day!!) and the MC's powers are even better. I also love how the author includes other planets in the story.
5 years ago
29
After_Wing
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
16
Hartman
Barely readable grammar and the sentence structure was very off. Even though I'm just a newbie author too, but your story is just awful.
I have always been the Marvel fans, so whenever a Marvel fanfic come out, I would read it. As a fellow fanfic author, I suggest you fix your story first. The wish-fulfillment vibe is very thick here.
5 years ago
14
Crushingheavens
The story is very nice with a very proactive protagonist. Like the different ways in which the author explores new ideas and characters. The update speed currently is very good. Keep up the good work author-san and my power stones are yours.
5 years ago
14
FNU_LNU
saw this pretty high up in the rankings, so i decided to read it.
all the time i was reading this story i had a sense of wrongness in it. then i realized what it was... i was actually reading a summary of the story... it is just massive event list without developing world and characters. for comprehension you need to at minimum watch all marvel universe movies (avengers franchise+xmen) and maybe read some more like xmen comics. story was written under presumption that reader is knows all about marvel universe.
story is pretty fast paced, with lot of plot armor and stupidly OP MC. MC is so stupidly OP that there is no reason for any other characters to even exist. too much wish fulfillment in a novel.
5 years ago
13
dccobra
Author this was a great story... I enjoyed it very much...
You had a great story going on... why did you stop updating chapters...??? Pleas continue this story...☹☹☹
5 years ago
9
HerMajestyEmpress
This is a really great story which made me wait for its updates for a couple of months now. Sometimes, I reread the story from the beginning eventhough I have already read it. This is by far one of the best fanfiction I have read. I am just wondering when the author will continue this story? Is it on hiatus because if yes, please do tell cause I have not much patience waiting most especially on things not meant to finish. One of the things I really hate about stories is when it discontinued or in hiatus or when it ends being a tragedy. I really hope the author continues this story for this is one of the truly best of the many fanfics I have read.
5 years ago
4
Piggy
How is this novel so high in the rankings???
This novel is just sooooooooooooooooooooooooo bad.
Just shows that the readers on this site has low standards
5 years ago
4
lstreader
Really well done. The MC is OP but doesn't abuse his powers or totally screw up the timeline like some other MC's from fanfics. The romance relationships are nice, and it is an interesting read. Really wish that they author would continue writing though, kinda sad to see such a good work go unfinished.
4 years ago
3
Denzel_theking
I am only rating this so high cause this guy has the same name as me so his story must be great 👍🏼
I haven’t read this yet so I can’t give other reasons but try it I’m sure u won’t be disappointed
5 years ago
3
Young_Savage
It's really good development and the character is badass but the most tragic part is that they haven't posted in 11 months but the overall story is fucking amazing
4 years ago
2
timepiece94
Need more chapers where r u
Need more chapers where r u.
Need more chapers where r u
Need more chapers where r u
Need more chapers where r u
5 years ago
2
JokerMarksmanH7
One of the best fan-fic so far😁😁.........................................................................................hope u don't drope ,to damn awesome
5 years ago
2
Feebling
Very interesting when alive....Now it is only an incomplete rotting corpse of the webnovel servers that shows up on the search results to piss you off. Just like pop up websites everyone hates.
5 years ago
2
BrandanCMZ
I really like the story but sometimes it is really slow in updating i hope the author can keep it up .......................................
Protagonist is great, updates are amazing (3 chapters per day!!) and the MC's powers are even better. I also love how the author includes other planets in the story.
Reveal Spoiler
Barely readable grammar and the sentence structure was very off. Even though I'm just a newbie author too, but your story is just awful. I have always been the Marvel fans, so whenever a Marvel fanfic come out, I would read it. As a fellow fanfic author, I suggest you fix your story first. The wish-fulfillment vibe is very thick here.
The story is very nice with a very proactive protagonist. Like the different ways in which the author explores new ideas and characters. The update speed currently is very good. Keep up the good work author-san and my power stones are yours.
saw this pretty high up in the rankings, so i decided to read it. all the time i was reading this story i had a sense of wrongness in it. then i realized what it was... i was actually reading a summary of the story... it is just massive event list without developing world and characters. for comprehension you need to at minimum watch all marvel universe movies (avengers franchise+xmen) and maybe read some more like xmen comics. story was written under presumption that reader is knows all about marvel universe. story is pretty fast paced, with lot of plot armor and stupidly OP MC. MC is so stupidly OP that there is no reason for any other characters to even exist. too much wish fulfillment in a novel.
Author this was a great story... I enjoyed it very much... You had a great story going on... why did you stop updating chapters...??? Pleas continue this story...☹☹☹
This is a really great story which made me wait for its updates for a couple of months now. Sometimes, I reread the story from the beginning eventhough I have already read it. This is by far one of the best fanfiction I have read. I am just wondering when the author will continue this story? Is it on hiatus because if yes, please do tell cause I have not much patience waiting most especially on things not meant to finish. One of the things I really hate about stories is when it discontinued or in hiatus or when it ends being a tragedy. I really hope the author continues this story for this is one of the truly best of the many fanfics I have read.
How is this novel so high in the rankings??? This novel is just sooooooooooooooooooooooooo bad. Just shows that the readers on this site has low standards
Really well done. The MC is OP but doesn't abuse his powers or totally screw up the timeline like some other MC's from fanfics. The romance relationships are nice, and it is an interesting read. Really wish that they author would continue writing though, kinda sad to see such a good work go unfinished.
I am only rating this so high cause this guy has the same name as me so his story must be great 👍🏼 I haven’t read this yet so I can’t give other reasons but try it I’m sure u won’t be disappointed
It's really good development and the character is badass but the most tragic part is that they haven't posted in 11 months but the overall story is fucking amazing
Need more chapers where r u Need more chapers where r u. Need more chapers where r u Need more chapers where r u Need more chapers where r u
One of the best fan-fic so far😁😁.........................................................................................hope u don't drope ,to damn awesome
Very interesting when alive....Now it is only an incomplete rotting corpse of the webnovel servers that shows up on the search results to piss you off. Just like pop up websites everyone hates.
I really like the story but sometimes it is really slow in updating i hope the author can keep it up .......................................