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Jing Mo Chen fell in love at first smell when he smelt Mu Xi Xing's scent

Jing Mo Chen: Youngest General in the
Military, God-like figure in the business world

Mu Xi Xing fell in love at first sight when she looked into Jing Mo Chen's eyes

Mu Xi Xing: Pervert-like genius, Incredible senses

How did the two of them meet and how would their love story be like?

Mu Xi Xing only wanted to find her birth parents but ended up finding a whole lot more conspiracy.

Jing Mo Chen helped her along the way and the two of them helped others.

What else would they find out and what would they get at the end?


Honest Reviews:

"The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between." 

"Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter.
The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author."


Disclosure:

Most readers that don't like this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Grammar mistakes 
2. Illogical

Most readers that love this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Alpha male and female lead with their love for one another
2. A new type of story


There are good and bad reviews. So, it is up to you to decide.

Sweet Military Marriage: Mr. Jing, Please Spare Me!

When Mo Xi saw the tent, picnic mat, and barbecue pit, she was very shocked.

"I wanted to prepare them myself in the morning, but I decided against it and got Feng Rui to help us set up the things."

Jing Mo Chen then guided Mo Xi to the picnic mat and got her to sit down before he took out a basket of picnic food and placed them on the mat.

Jing Mo Chen then took out a fresh bottle of milk and handed it to Mo Xi.

Mo Xi drank the bottle of milk diligently and felt that it was sweeter than usual.

Mo Xi then took out the sandwiches from the basket and fed them to Jing Mo Chen.

The rest of their brunch was filled with sweetness in the air because they kept feeding each other and occasionally, steal a few kisses from each other.

After they finished their breakfast, Mo Xi then sat on Jing Mo Chen's lap while they read storybooks for their children.

Shooting Stars