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Jing Mo Chen fell in love at first smell when he smelt Mu Xi Xing's scent

Jing Mo Chen: Youngest General in the
Military, God-like figure in the business world

Mu Xi Xing fell in love at first sight when she looked into Jing Mo Chen's eyes

Mu Xi Xing: Pervert-like genius, Incredible senses

How did the two of them meet and how would their love story be like?

Mu Xi Xing only wanted to find her birth parents but ended up finding a whole lot more conspiracy.

Jing Mo Chen helped her along the way and the two of them helped others.

What else would they find out and what would they get at the end?


Honest Reviews:

"The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between." 

"Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter.
The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author."


Disclosure:

Most readers that don't like this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Grammar mistakes 
2. Illogical

Most readers that love this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Alpha male and female lead with their love for one another
2. A new type of story


There are good and bad reviews. So, it is up to you to decide.

Sweet Military Marriage: Mr. Jing, Please Spare Me!

"You said many things just now. Which sentence are you referring to?"

"Something that could trigger their minds. Something that could make them vote base on their likings and not be affected by what they had heard."

"How could they not be affected by what they had heard? Not only did Ning Hua said something that sounded really suspicious, but Luo Bing Bing also said something suspicious. This is as though your brother is hiding something from the audience and judges. Something important that only the people involved would know. Ning Hua is targeting your brother directly while Luo Bing Bing is targeting An An directly, which would indirectly affect your brother. So, how could they not be swayed by what they heard?"

"I wouldn't say that they won't be affected totally. However, there would be people who wouldn't, and there would be people who would be swayed but end up swaying back. As for why they would sway back, that is because of what I had said."

Hidden Star