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Jing Mo Chen fell in love at first smell when he smelt Mu Xi Xing's scent

Jing Mo Chen: Youngest General in the
Military, God-like figure in the business world

Mu Xi Xing fell in love at first sight when she looked into Jing Mo Chen's eyes

Mu Xi Xing: Pervert-like genius, Incredible senses

How did the two of them meet and how would their love story be like?

Mu Xi Xing only wanted to find her birth parents but ended up finding a whole lot more conspiracy.

Jing Mo Chen helped her along the way and the two of them helped others.

What else would they find out and what would they get at the end?


Honest Reviews:

"The development is very happy-go-lucky to me. There is not much depth to situations or conversations and a lot of things are just placed in peoples laps. A lot of the wording of the sentences sounds basic with not much description- like it is what it is because I said so i.e. 'the cat felt sad because the cat felt sad' or the situation goes the way i want it to or people react in a positive way or negative way but not much in between." 

"Picked up this little gem recently. Spent about 5 hours reading continuously to catch up. Great book, great character design, great everything. There are a few hiccups with the grammar and vocabulary but there is significant improvements in each chapter.
The author never fails to entertain. Keep up the good work author."


Disclosure:

Most readers that don't like this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Grammar mistakes 
2. Illogical

Most readers that love this story falls into the following two categories:

1. Alpha male and female lead with their love for one another
2. A new type of story


There are good and bad reviews. So, it is up to you to decide.

Sweet Military Marriage: Mr. Jing, Please Spare Me!

Mo Xi sat in her car with Tyler and the others as she looked at the message that Donovan had sent her an hour ago.

[Be at Town G in an hour! You must go there now! There is someone that you want to see there! Bring some people along with you! Make sure not to let others know!]

"Who is this person?" Mo Xi mumbled as she read the text again and again as though it could help her decipher who she would be seeing later.

"Could it be your parents?" Valerie then asked with slight excitement in her tone.

"I hope that it would be them but there is something telling me that it isn't..." Mo Xi shook her head slowly.

Mo Xi then looked outside the car through the side window, "This town… this town is where President Ji's wife was raised in… If there is someone else other than my parents that I want to see, it would be her... Could it be her?"

Someone That You Want To See