How do you achieve greatness?
Is it thru power, money, talent, and even then would you be satisfied with what you have.
A young man who wants to rule the universe, can he do it?
Would the young man be able to achieve brilliance?
Would he rise, become a star, shining bright in the sky?
Would he create a new path?
Or
Would he lose his humanity?
Would he fall?
A mysterious script, will it bring chaos?
Sever the fate, impose the rule, command the world, forge your destiny, all this to become eternal
THE ETERNAL SUTRA
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Seems like a decent concept, I like the prologue. Let's see how it turns out. Keep it up author and just try top proofread once before posting.