Rewrited as Modern Military System

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Love the 8th chapter, keep up the good work Maxwell KHA, and do you think the MC will summon sci fi weapons later on in future chapters??? Not to mention, upgrades for the base and weapons is kinda neat from the 20th century to the 21st century and all is good now they have combat ability to fight against the most powerful enemies in this fantasy world!!!!😎💫💫💫💫 five out of five stars.

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Writing Quality is passable, only issue being grammar. Seems to be daily updates. Story development is bad. Basically, BAM, something happens and they deal with it. Character design is lacking, not much dialogue of value either. MC concept is good, but is a static character with no real development, and his system has no actual curve just the authors whim. World Background is minimal. Going to drop this novel personally. The concept for the story is good, but the execution is lacking. Good luck with your work Author

Thansks for the 7th chapter Maxwell KHA, I give this a five out of five stars. And also, is it possible that the MC will reveal himself and his power to every country of this fantasy world once he expands his influence in the island and crossing the ocean with the carrier strike group with escort ships under his command????😎😉💫💫💫💫💫

Love the 2 chapters so far and the climax with the reference of the lorax and not mention leveling the island to make a FOB, real genius; keep up the good work O give this a five out five stars!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍💫

Love the character development for chapter 3 and I kinds guess that some of the soldiers the MC summoned may have a sense of humor. Also I give this chapter a 5 out of 5. Keep up the good work, looking forward for more chapters and I don't want this novel to be dropped... modern weapons of science will clash with swords, magic, and other creatures in this fantasy world!!!!!!!😅💫👍👍👍👍👍

I got hard when I saw the title please don’t ever drop this kind sir all the modern military novels are either dropped or have really **** english

Good starting point for the first chapter, keep up the good on this new webnovel for modern weapons clashing in a fantasy world. Looking forward to new updated chapters in the future!!!!!👍👍👍👍👍🎄🛷😎😉

I always ask myself this question, why do authors like to make their MC so idiot ?______________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for the 26th chapter and the rest of ther others chapters Maxwell KHA, 5 out of 5 stars for this one. Looking forward to the next chapter when the real fight against the kingdoms armed forces will begin soon. Also, will the MC implement other weapons for a counter attack against the Soulisphate Kingdom such as uav drones, ugv drones, submarines, and even the THAAD missile defense system because I would love to have them in action on the battlefronts!!!!!!!!!😎💫💫💫💫💫📰

The plot is interesting and could make this story a pretty good one if it's potential is used correctly. The writing quality can make anybody see that the Author is not an English native but nothing that can't be improved with time or a good proofread/editor. Writing style is a bit strange for my taste, lack some "details", make me feel like I'm reading a fast forward of the story. This lack of descriptive details make the global story-telling process a bit bland for me. But this doesn't remove the potential of this story and I hope the Author will improve the further he goes.

I give the 18th chapter a five out five stars Maxwell KHA, keep up the good work. I also love the flashback of the MC's backstory when he was still alive in earth as military service member when it cones to fighing in a war and participating in many battlefronts and hopes goes to show that an incursion on Portsmouth is inevitable. And I have been wondering, will the MC summon/deploy of military amphibious hardware such LCACs, AAv7s, ACVS (newest USMC apc model), or even amphibious assualt ships like the USS Wasp (LHD-1) and the USS Essex (LHD-2)!!!!!!!😁🤔💫💫💫💫💫