Damn that vampire to throw me into a world of many powerful beings that can destroy you with a flick but luckily that vampire gave me cards that let me stay alive in this world.
Will this story ever be continued? I seriously hope it is it’s incredible great job man 😂🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾
6 years ago
6
Smiles
This is a surprisingly good story. I don't often see fate crossovers that I like. Most of the time the author rushes the main character out and they get too strong too fast but this speed seems fine. 2nd chapter and we are starting to meet the regular cast (Or who I assume is the cast) and only one card is talking to him. Bonus its my favorite lancer. Our protagonist trains and doesn't just get random power ups. All in all great story, only a couple of grammar errors but the author is good enough that they get there point across even with them.
6 years ago
4
XTRALONGA
Love typemoon fanfics and crossovers more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls
5 years ago
3
Janemba_The_Demon
Please do more of this when you have the time !
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6 years ago
3
ryanryan
Somewhat similar to “Normal Life? Yeah, Right” by Writer with bad Grammar T-T from fan fiction.net. Though there are a some differences it does feel as if it is copied and pasted on.
5 years ago
1
Darwin111111
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4 years ago
0
muid
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4 years ago
0
chris_kidder_4355
so far i am loving this story so far i wonder when he uses use cu chulain can he use his alter form and berserker form at all i was curious about that if it was possible i hope soon he will use beasts 1 goetia install i bet the justice league wold probaly crap themselves meeting king solomon seventy two demons pillars combined all at the same time so i hope the next chapter will be coming out soon i would appreciate it i really geeting into this story so far so keep up the great work o another question i have is king solomon in his grand caster form or just a normal servant form when he is installed and when can the mc use when he install each one can he use all their class you now when a servant can be summoned in multiple classes
5 years ago
0
GhostWolf
I like it so far but I have one question is this dropped?
Would’ve rated higher if one of the class cards didn’t tAlK lIkE tHiS.... only happened for one chapter but it’s the fourth? Class card used so far so it’s going to be used a lot but he talks like this
5 years ago
0
SlothElephant2k18
You did amazing job with this story, but you need to slow down the story development. Last chapter end with he talk to Rachel A.K.A Raven, but it's end just like that. Please, you can do better than that.
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Will this story ever be continued? I seriously hope it is it’s incredible great job man 😂🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾🤙🏾
This is a surprisingly good story. I don't often see fate crossovers that I like. Most of the time the author rushes the main character out and they get too strong too fast but this speed seems fine. 2nd chapter and we are starting to meet the regular cast (Or who I assume is the cast) and only one card is talking to him. Bonus its my favorite lancer. Our protagonist trains and doesn't just get random power ups. All in all great story, only a couple of grammar errors but the author is good enough that they get there point across even with them.
Love typemoon fanfics and crossovers more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls more pls
Please do more of this when you have the time ! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASS PLEASE PLEASE
Somewhat similar to “Normal Life? Yeah, Right” by Writer with bad Grammar T-T from fan fiction.net. Though there are a some differences it does feel as if it is copied and pasted on.
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so far i am loving this story so far i wonder when he uses use cu chulain can he use his alter form and berserker form at all i was curious about that if it was possible i hope soon he will use beasts 1 goetia install i bet the justice league wold probaly crap themselves meeting king solomon seventy two demons pillars combined all at the same time so i hope the next chapter will be coming out soon i would appreciate it i really geeting into this story so far so keep up the great work o another question i have is king solomon in his grand caster form or just a normal servant form when he is installed and when can the mc use when he install each one can he use all their class you now when a servant can be summoned in multiple classes
I like it so far but I have one question is this dropped?
Just amazing. Can't say more. Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please Update!
Would’ve rated higher if one of the class cards didn’t tAlK lIkE tHiS.... only happened for one chapter but it’s the fourth? Class card used so far so it’s going to be used a lot but he talks like this
You did amazing job with this story, but you need to slow down the story development. Last chapter end with he talk to Rachel A.K.A Raven, but it's end just like that. Please, you can do better than that.
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