Klyntar

Its a good story..well written..cool concept...though the only reason I gave a low rating is because the MC is kinda weak seeing all his potential and also the fact that this guy doesn't want to do **** by himself but rather wants a team..I dont like this and I think it's bull**** and stupid..i prefer one man army style... either war this is my opinion..anyway good author

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Reveal Spoiler

Reveal Spoiler

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It's pretty good so far. It's still in the beginning phases and a bit of a boy band flick but with a few more chapters itl start getting to the cool stuff I think.

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Shameless high review, I fuckin love the good grammar/spelling alongside the actual conversations happening! Like they make sense and actually lead somewhere. Also the Mc’s power and the foreshadowing is pretty awesome! Can’t wait to read more!!!!