Everything was going good, until one day, Truck-kun got me, and then I had to do a lottery to decide my future.....
Now I am in a Marvel universe with the wisdom king Raphael (from Tensura) as my key to survive, added to that is the fact that I am reborn as a god, and have thousands of years before the plot starts, so let's enjoy this new life.
I also wish for you a similar afterlife.
as the Author, what can I say except, enjoy.
So far, the story is fantastic, and I really see potential in it. My only complaint is that the author should have a website where he posts chapters in advance, and he can ask for compensation. There is a famous website starting with the letter P. Maybe he can create an account after reading this review and post some additional chapters because I am very excited, and I blame it all on the author for an amazing story.
Dropped on chapter 05. His system has too much personality, to the point as the Mc can't even plan for an objective to his life for himself. His system chooses his divinity and keep it as a secret from him, he can't even decide if he is gonna sleep or stay awake without asking for his system if it is a good decision... as I can see, he is just a puppet following his system's decisions, is too boring to read a mc that just mindless follow everything his system tell him to do. 💀💀💤💤
The idea for this novel is good with a lot of potential, but - I'm sorry to say this - the execution is trash. Main issue is how you made Raphael act, too much character and power over MC. She's supposed to be a skill, a support tool for the MC. A lot of wasted potential right there, could have a lot of space for character development.
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Liking the story so far and would like more chapters
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I can't wait to see how far this fanfic progresses. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very interesting 🧐 expecting more great chapters
romence (not even romance just a forced unsatisfiyng crush) started too early. raphael becoming sentient too early. no plot. no development. and this just from 10 chapters
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