Everything was going good, until one day, Truck-kun got me, and then I had to do a lottery to decide my future.....
Now I am in a Marvel universe with the wisdom king Raphael (from Tensura) as my key to survive, added to that is the fact that I am reborn as a god, and have thousands of years before the plot starts, so let's enjoy this new life.
I also wish for you a similar afterlife.
as the Author, what can I say except, enjoy.
So far, the story is fantastic, and I really see potential in it. My only complaint is that the author should have a website where he posts chapters in advance, and he can ask for compensation. There is a famous website starting with the letter P. Maybe he can create an account after reading this review and post some additional chapters because I am very excited, and I blame it all on the author for an amazing story.
the fanfic is really good and I am honestly confused where all hate comes from as mc at the start to under chapter 10 was a baby of course he will rely on her what do you think he is a china man that cultivate in the womb??? and mc at above chapter 20 didnt rely on her in wars and told her expectedly that he was to learn warfare and gain experience on his own so take these other hate comments in a pinch of salt.
Dropped on chapter 05. His system has too much personality, to the point as the Mc can't even plan for an objective to his life for himself. His system chooses his divinity and keep it as a secret from him, he can't even decide if he is gonna sleep or stay awake without asking for his system if it is a good decision... as I can see, he is just a puppet following his system's decisions, is too boring to read a mc that just mindless follow everything his system tell him to do. 💀💀💤💤
The idea for this novel is good with a lot of potential, but - I'm sorry to say this - the execution is trash. Main issue is how you made Raphael act, too much character and power over MC. She's supposed to be a skill, a support tool for the MC. A lot of wasted potential right there, could have a lot of space for character development.
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FxUxCxK this NOVEL HAS POTENTIAL TO BE A MASTERPIECE MULTIVERSE STORY 3000 CHAPTERS IN DONE RIGHT..THIS IS MARVEL JESUS AUTHOR AND MULTIVERSE HAREM HIS JESUS..AUTHOR I SEE YOUR MC IN OTHER -ANIME-GAMES-TVSHOWS--i love to see the mc in ANIME MUSHOKU TENSIE-WITCHER-DC-CYBERPUNK 2077-MASS EFFECT-GOD OF WAR 4-BUFFY-XENA-LAST OF US-ONE PIECE-TENSURA-WALKING DEAD-I LOVE THIS NOVEL DO NOT DROP IT PLEASE AUTHOR
Liking the story so far and would like more chapters
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it's good it's good what's more you want? huh
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The story so far (chapter 25) is very good, and the update is constant.
I just finished all the available chapters, and I'm so upset there aren't more yet.
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