The concealed love story

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This was a good story to read one time..... Not more not less Just a story with last minute suspense and confusion .....but that was okay ....but ...after reading this you feel like .... it's not completely ended....so you can end it yourself in your mind...in the way you want to....

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Writing quality: 1 star There are easily fixable grammatical errors in this story. Simply using grammatic program or reading the work aloud will fix it. Updating stability: 5 stars Because I’m not sure when there were updates this one gets 5 stars. Story Development: 3 stars Carlene quickly fell for the twins (or two people). Though it was spread out over 2 months we weren’t there to see any real development. Character design: 1 star None of the characters were defined and there weren’t enough chapters in the book to get a good feel on the characters personalities World background: 1 star There wasn’t much description on the background of the world they’re in. Other: Things just moved very fast. We weren’t told what the competition was. We weren’t informed of anything about her parents until the end of the book and overall there was just a lot of confusion and drama at the end. If you take this into consideration and spruce up things here and there the book will be much better.

So good! I love it! Other than grammatical errors, the storyline is great! Didn't expect the ending tho. Llieon whom she hated would be the only one to stay by her side and save her in her downfall. Thumbs up for the twists.👍👍

I just added this book to my library. I am not really sure about it. I hope it's good though. I don't want to be disappointed. Wish me luck.

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