Rebirth of The Elemental Goddess

Shameless Author here, just wanted to know what you people think. This is gonna be my first original Novel as my other one is somewhat of a fan-fic. Trying out a new concept and don’t worry my other novel will still be continuing. So for those that thought I may have dropped it well think again.

It’s literally a down-graded version of Nanomancer Reborn - I’ve become a Snowgirl? I stopped at chap. 6 because it was too much for me. I mean, you could at least try to make your own plot a little.. but it is exactly the same thing but more rushed and with some little change here and there. It doesn’t even feel realistic because it is so much rushed .. Well, I understand the fact that you wanted to re-create a version of Nanomancer of your own, but atleast quote the Novel, and put a little more efforts in to it .. No offence ! Cya.

Ok so, as of now, the novels looks pretty good, though for someone who loves killing humans and swore to never trust someone again, the MC already spills the beans for the 2 people she just met, I know she did the contract and all but this could have been worked better, Also make the fights a little longer and more detailed that the novel will Be all good

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It is just a ripoff of nanomanser reborn. Read that masterpiece instead of a blatant ripoff. The only good thing is the number of updates due to having great material to copy.

This gives off immense Nanomancer, the beginning giving off nearly the identical start. Very bothered continuing ahead of the novel because from what I've seen, too many chapters are filled with stats and numbers filling up half the chapters.

Sangat mirip dengan Nanomancer Reborn - i'v becoming snow girl. Tapi Mc jauh lebih Op dan plot berjalan dengan sangat cepat. Kemiripan novel ini lebih dari 90% karena fondasi dalam novel sama persis tapi penulis membuat segalanya jauh lebih sederhana.

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Its a worse version of I've become a snow girl. The grammar is sub par and its like reading the summary on the back of a book. The author needs to expand outside of 'she beat him up'. Also you clearly said she has trust issues, yet the first teenager she meets she trusts. The random all caps screaming is also annoying as ****.

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The story is pretty good but there are things that could be better. Pretty much anything about her spells we know nothing about. Not how many spells she has, nor anything about any of her other powers too. The whole thing about her trust issues could’ve been done in a smoother way. It felt kinda rushed or not genuine.

This book is great but lack in writing. First language of the author might not be English. Otherwise it’s great. Keep up the good work. 👍🙏

It was good until sge started killing everyone. But this is what i think i don't realy like the mc going and killimg innocent ppl in any books its just me so if you could make another like this but with a mc that doesnt kill innocent ppl I'd like it a lot

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