Immortuos

This is my first story so it might not be good. I would like it if u give me suggestions about which direction u would like the story to go and please do tell if i make mistakes in grammar please comment about it normally, calmly without being salty and when i say that u comment about it don't just say its shit but explain why its shit.
And i will write this when i have free time and when i have ideas about the story so comment and give me ideas that i can implement in my story
Not my picture, i took it from the internet.
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The mc is ran over by truck after complaining how there is no good novels about the mc being a dragon and now he has a chance to make his own draconic story with this one in a lifetime rebirth.

The Draconic Rebirth

While he was nearing the exit he saw a corpse of a pure white dragon. It was at least 15 meters high and you could see her wings. Stretched out, they would probably be at least 10 meters wide.


Drako 'Is... that my mother?' He came closer towards the body and inspected it


Drako 'If something could kill a dragon here I should be careful'


Drako went out of the cave and tried to find a river. He searched for about half an hour until he found one. The water was glistening in the morning sun. the day was warm, it was very peaceful.


When he looked into the water he saw a white egg with legs sticking out and holes through which he can look with his eyes. He also had a small hole with cracks surrounding it where his mouth is supposed to be, he guessed it was like that so he could eat.


While he was walking through the forest to where his instincts were telling him that it will be safer, but then, under an old-looking tree he saw a dark caterpillar sleeping.


"Maybe I should sneak up on it and attack it while it's asleep?" Drako thought to himself and after a moments thought he decided that he will attack it


While he was sneaking he got a notification


[Stealth] LvL 1. - It is 20% harder to notice you


[Stealth attack] LvL 1. - You do 50% more base dmg to a person who hasn't noticed you while you were using [Stealth]


"Ooh, so you can get skills like this" Drako thought gleefully


Drako continued to sneak towards the caterpillar and then he found a perfect spot from where he'll attack.


"Now!!" Drako struck at the caterpillar with a headbutt and he was able to stay unnoticed and because of the [Stealth attack] he did a lot of dmg


The caterpillar screeched in pain and turned towards the egg with fury in its eyes at first but when it saw the egg the look changed from fury to hunger!


Mother