Immortuos

This is my first story so it might not be good. I would like it if u give me suggestions about which direction u would like the story to go and please do tell if i make mistakes in grammar please comment about it normally, calmly without being salty and when i say that u comment about it don't just say its shit but explain why its shit.
And i will write this when i have free time and when i have ideas about the story so comment and give me ideas that i can implement in my story
Not my picture, i took it from the internet.
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The mc is ran over by truck after complaining how there is no good novels about the mc being a dragon and now he has a chance to make his own draconic story with this one in a lifetime rebirth.

The Draconic Rebirth

"Damn! My head hurts." Drako thought while clutching his head with his imaginative arms


[Headbut] LvL 1. - attacking with your head gives extra dmg for 10% of his base stats


Before Drako expressed his happiness the caterpillar jumped at him, but Drako evaded it at the last moment.


"Shit, it almost got me." Drako used [Inspect Status] on it


"Really, only 2 dmg!? Maybe I overestimated myself..." Drako thought to himself while he evaded the caterpillar.


He evaded the caterpillar's attack once more but this time he saw a chance for a counter-attack and he bit of a part of its flesh, making it bleed. He used [Inspect Status] once more to see if it has the bleeding status.


HP: 4.2/9 (Bleeding - 0.1 HP per second)


[Bite] LvL 1. - increases attack dmg when you bite for 15% of his base stats


"YES! It's bleeding and now I only have to evade while he bleeds out" He thought gleefully


He evaded the caterpillar through the forest but he made sure that the caterpillar was behind him but he got too confident and attacked it instead of letting it bleed out and the caterpillar wasn't going to miss this opportunity and it hit him, hard. Drako was hit so hard that he flew and hit a tree and couldn't move but before the caterpillar finished him it bled out.


Abilities: [Inspect Status LvL 1.], [Stealth LvL. 1], [Stealth attack LvL. 1], [Headbut LvL. 1], [Bite LvL. 1]


Drako "ONLY 1 HP!? I got too confident... I should be more "cough" careful in the future."


Egging on the Caterpillar