Immortuos

This is my first story so it might not be good. I would like it if u give me suggestions about which direction u would like the story to go and please do tell if i make mistakes in grammar please comment about it normally, calmly without being salty and when i say that u comment about it don't just say its shit but explain why its shit.
And i will write this when i have free time and when i have ideas about the story so comment and give me ideas that i can implement in my story
Not my picture, i took it from the internet.
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The mc is ran over by truck after complaining how there is no good novels about the mc being a dragon and now he has a chance to make his own draconic story with this one in a lifetime rebirth.

The Draconic Rebirth

"What should I mutate, hmm..." Drako thought to himself while looking at the [Mutation] menu.


"Well since I am still an egg I won't take the Sacs so I suppose ill take the [Teeth] and... Uhm [Eyes]" After he said that he felt a small stinge of pain on his eyes and in his mouth


"Huh, I thought it would've hurt more" He thought to himself


Drako "It seems I can see a little bit farther but only a little more than before and my teeth seem to be a bit sharper but not anything significant, so I guess the good stuff comes at [Mutation] LvL 5"


After his meal and mutation, he was full and thirsty so he went to the river and had a drink. While he was drinking he was worried over where he would stay the night.


After he finished drinking he started to follow the river till it was dark but when he started thinking about going back he stumbled upon a cave.


He wasn't sure if anything was in it so he started sneaking towards it. When he came into a cave he saw 5 small caterpillars and 1 caterpillar which was as big as the last one he saw.


Drako used [Inspect status] on the small ones


The four of them were asleep while only one was awake


He inspected the big one to see if it was different than the first one he saw


I should probably deal with the little ones first so that they don't bother me when I'm fighting the big one.


He then started sneaking towards the little caterpillar which was pretending to sleep, luckily for him it was quite near the exit so he was able to silence him without being heard. He continued sneaking towards the second one and killed it, then the third one, then the fourth one but when he was about to kill the fifth one the Dark Caterpillar noticed him. you could hear her screeching with rage before charging at him in an attempt to save her babies. 


Drako thought he was fast enough to kill the baby and then evade but he was wrong. Once he killed it, the mother had already hit him with a charge.


Drako lost only 2 health because of his improved vitality. The caterpillar wanted to bite his legs off but he dodged left and bit into her back with his newly sharpened teeth dealing 3.5 dmg. As the caterpillar screeched in pain Drako used the chance to get away from her and get some distance but when he moved back he hit a wall so when he saw her charging he had an idea.


Drako let her charge until she was very near but then he dodged at the last moment and she hit her head against the stone wall losing 1.5 health and becoming dazed. Drako wouldn't miss this chance so he bit her head with his teeth dealing 3 dmg and killing her.
