Immortuos

This is my first story so it might not be good. I would like it if u give me suggestions about which direction u would like the story to go and please do tell if i make mistakes in grammar please comment about it normally, calmly without being salty and when i say that u comment about it don't just say its shit but explain why its shit.
And i will write this when i have free time and when i have ideas about the story so comment and give me ideas that i can implement in my story
Not my picture, i took it from the internet.
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The mc is ran over by truck after complaining how there is no good novels about the mc being a dragon and now he has a chance to make his own draconic story with this one in a lifetime rebirth.

The Draconic Rebirth

"First evolution here I come!!" said Drako excitedly


Drako "Okay tell me about my evolution options"


It is called Little Dragon because it is amongst the smallest dragons with the size of a horse. No evolution potential


It is considered a delicacy among humanoid creatures. Baby Dragon has low combat potential because of his short fangs and claws but it also has the most potential


Drako "Well the choice is obvious I want to be one of the strongest beings after all so I choose [Baby Dragon]" Immediately after he said [Baby Dragon] darkness came upon him and he lost consciousness


After a couple of hours he woke up "Uhh... i feel drowsy" he said as he got on his feet


"Wait, I just evolved! Let's see my status!" He exclaimed bursting with excitement and anticipation


Abilities: [Inspect Status LvL 2.], [Stealth LvL. 2], [Stealth attack LvL. 2], [Headbut LvL. 1], [Bite LvL. 2]


Mutations: [Teeth LvL 1.], [Eyes LvL 1.]


"Well this is a nice increase in stats, ill put 2 points in vitality, oh and I should eat those caterpillars before they go bad


Drako "I can really eat a lot more now that I am a dragon and not human, huh, well I suppose I'll go have a drink at the river, caterpillars really do make you thirsty, and then ill mutate


After Drako drank and bathed at the river he went back into the cave to mutate


[WARNING: You can choose only one sac and it will affect your evolution]


After a couple of minutes of thinking, Drako had decided "I'll mutate my Claws, Teeth, Muscle, Scales and I'll also mutate to get Horns and which Sac should I choose, hmm..."


Drako " I will get the Lightning Sac" The moment he said that immense pain hit him. He felt the pain on his forehead where his horns were growing. He dropped on the floor in pain as he felt a terrible piercing feeling inside his abdomen even worse inside of him where his Sac started growing. But after the pain came pleasure. Pleasure for becoming stronger, and the pleasure for growing


No longer an egg with legs