Percy Jackson in Skyrim OP

I don't know how long you've studied english but I as a NOT native speaker was at this level when i was 9 years old...that was me, learning for 1 year. I cant believe that dude gave you such a good rating....Writing quality is 1 star, serously you don't even mark the speech " " and that's by FAR not everything. Character design? nonexistent, the only desciption you made was - "black hair and green-ocean like eyes" or something like that. World background -> Skyrim...nothing much no closer descriptions of anything Story development? HAH! If I can't understand the gibberish you write, how can I know how it develops?

This was pretty bad. Even for a first time writer this was bad. I am also not a fan of authors trying to inflate their chapter count by writing the minimum amount possible to get to a different chapter.

Are you still writing

Ummm are u trolling or is this you're real grammar? Are u really from Canada? Im just asking cuz it says you are from Canada and your english is **** im not good either but damn....

If you made it past the first chapter expecting an absolute masterpiece then my condolences. I do give props to the author for trying to write despite English obviously not being their cup of tea.

Overall it is bad in almost all categories. 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎